英语翻译高手的进

请各位英语大神帮忙翻译一下论文的摘要
摘 要

随着人们生活水平的不断提高,人们的安全意识、高品质的生活意识都在不断增强,对具备防盗和安全报警功能的多集成的一体化智能安防系统的需求也日益增加。
市面上普及的防盗措施有:传统的机械式防盗系统(如防盗门、窗)和电子式防盗系统(如无线红外探测器、无线门磁探测器等),前者多存在诸如火灾逃生困难、为攀爬进入别的房屋提供便利等的安全隐患,后者多采用国外技术进行被动式探测,敌我不分。
本设计采用多路多级主动式红外探测技术,分三级四路进行红外监测。所有防盗探测输出均采用开关信号,并外设模拟演示接口。探测模块可以根据需要任意选择。各级防盗检测采用脉冲信号,节能且抗干扰。本设计也基本满足国家住宅产业化促进中心的六项智能化要求,预留有硬件输出接口,在需要上位机采集信息时,只需要对固件升级即可实现。
关键词:主动式红外防盗;火灾报警;煤气报警;毕业设计;
下面是直译的感觉很不好,
As people living standard unceasing enhancement, people's consciousness of safety, high quality of life are growing, to have more security and security alarm function integration of intelligent security systems integration demand is increasing.
Have universal anti-theft measures on market: traditional mechanical anti-theft system (such as security doors, windows) and electronic anti-theft system, such as wireless infrared detector, door magnetic detector, etc.), the former such as fire escape difficulties, provide convenience for climbing into the other houses such as security hidden danger, the latter is more use of foreign technology, passive detecting them both.
This design adopts multiplex multi-level active infrared detecting technology, infrared monitoring points level 3 four road. All security detection output adopts switch signals and peripheral simulation demo interface. Detection module can use either. Security detection using pulse signal at various levels, energy saving and anti-jamming. This design also basically meet the national housing industrialization promotion center of six intelligent requirements, the reserve has output interface to the hardware and PC when gathering information when needed, just need the firmware upgrade can be realized.
Keywords: Active infrared anti-theft; Fire alarm; The gas alarm; Graduation design;

第1个回答  2014-06-08
具有讽刺意味的是,必须从单词的确切含义出发才能恰如其分地使用比喻性的语言,因为正是由于未能认识到单词的字面意思才导致混乱的比喻,因而造成比喻上的牛头不对马嘴。

备注:
1 比喻语言恰当使用的前提:要理解单词的确切含义。
2 混乱比喻的原因:未能理解/认识到单词的含义。
3 mixed metaphors是指“混乱的比喻,牛头不对马面的比喻”,而不是指”混合的比喻“。
例如:when the Nazi jackboots sing their swan song
译文:当纳粹马靴唱出其天鹅绝唱时
评点:马靴能做天鹅绝唱?这就是所谓的mixed metaphors(混乱的比喻),因为马靴和天鹅绝唱完全是两码事儿,怎可能放到一起比喻呢?这就是牛头不对马面的现实例子。