高二英语作文

“地球一小时”由世界自然基金会(WWF----word wide fund for nature)发起,倡议人们在三月最后一个星球六熄灯一小时,意在提高公民的环保节能意识,关注全球气候变化问题。请你以“Earth Hour”为主题为校English Corner 撰稿,写一篇字数120左右的文章,报道活动并宣传环保。
作文要求;
1,“地球一小时”简介:时间,发起者,活动宗旨
2,今年温州地区的活动:政府办公大楼和很多商场关灯;苍南举行无电晚会;温州大学师生捐款50多万用于植树造林。
3,倡议读者从自己做起(结合现实,添加至少两点建议)
参考词汇:办公大楼 office building;捐赠:donate
请大家帮忙写一篇吧

第1个回答  2010-04-30
Earth Hour
Please turn off lights and appliances for an hour from 8:30 pm in a gesture to highlight environmental concerns and to call for a binding pact to cut greenhouse gas emissions. This is Earth Hour, an activity organized by the World Wildlife Fund.
many countries and people took part in this activity.In wenzhou many markets and office buildings turned off the ligits.and there was also an evening pary without electiciy in Cangnan. many teachers and students from collsge donated over 500,000 RMB for tree planting and afforestation.
we can't give up on climate change and try our best to make a change. We can use less electicity as possible.and try to lower our carbon footprint.
第2个回答  2010-04-30
Earth Hour
"Earth Hour "was launched by WWF, propose people to turn off lights for one hour on the last saturday of March . Its purpose is
to improve the awareness of environment and energy protection
of citizens, and advocate higher concern about global climate change.
There have been some achievements. This year in our province Wenzhou office buildings and many shopping centers were turned off lights;also in Cangnan people hold no electricity party; what's more ,Wenzhou University students contributed more than 50 million for reforestation.
Although we have achieved great progress, we We still need to work hard .to we student We have to start from myslef Firstly we students should take good care of plants ,secondly we have to conserve resources
Only in this way, can our planet become much more fit for human habitation

为了使语意通顺连贯 我补充了一些内容 加入了许多关联词 和 高级句型
可能有些词汇高中还没学但大部分是初级词汇 希望对你有帮助

现翻译如下:

“地球一小时”由世界自然基金会(WWF----word wide fund for nature)发起,倡议人们在三月最后一个星球六熄灯一小时,其意在提高公民的环保节能意识,关注全球气候变化问题。
现在已经取得了一些成绩,今年在我 温州地区 政府办公大楼和很多商场关灯 ;苍南举行无电晚会;温州大学师生捐款50多万用于植树造林。
虽然我们取得了很多进步,但是我们仍需努力。对于我们学生来说 应该从自己做起,首先我们应该爱护花草树木 其次 我们应该节约资源。
只有这样,我们的地球才会变的更适合人类居住。