,英语作文你听到你的好朋友jack因为玩太多电脑游戏,现在头

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假如你叫Jim, 你听到你的好朋友Jack因为玩太多电脑游戏，现在头痛，眼睛不舒服( sore eyes), 腰背酸痛, 晚上还睡不好觉。请你写一封e-mail给他提些建议，劝告他照顾好自己的身体。 提示： 1. 远离电脑休息； 2. 每天做眼保健操 （do eye exercises）； 3. 多锻炼身体，不要一个姿势坐得太久而没有去运动； 要求： 1. 语句通顺、语意连贯； 2. 用上所有提示内容，可以适当发挥； 3. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 70词左右。 Dear Jack, I’m sorry to hear that you are not feeling well these days. You say that you have a headache. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will be better soon. Yours, Jim

Answer 1

One possible version ： Dear Jack, I’m sorry to hear that you are not feeling well these days. You say that you have a headache. You have sore eyes. You have a sore back. And you don’t sleep well at night. I hear that you played computer games too much. That’s probably why you are not feeling well. I think you should take breaks away from the computer. You shouldn’t use the computer for a long time. You should do eyes exercises to relax your eyes every day. And you should get lots of exercises. You shouldn’t sit in the same way for too long without playing sports. I hope you will be better soon. Yours, Jim