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Creative and Stupid Ad
An old couple, dancing exaggerated and singing:” No gifts receiving this year, gifts received only Melatonin（脑白金）.” This is the famous ad of Melatonin, which we can see in almost every channel of our television. It seems all Chinese know this ad.
It’s hard to deny that it is a most successful ad for commercial. First, single words with the name of its product, make it easy for customers to memorize. And the exaggerated dance of the old couple, especially the old lady who wore sexy underwear sometime, make the ad even impossible to forget. Second, it gives customers obvious implication, or even instruction. As a custom, every year, we Chinese will go to see our parents with gifts. So what gifts this year? While thinking about this, the famous ad line arouses,” No gifts receiving this year, gifts received only Melatonin.” This will have a big influence on customers’ choice. Third, unlike many ads, it neither boasts about its function, nor tells you the truth that the only function of Melatonin is it helps people to keep a regular sleep pattern. For this time, silence speaks.
But to my opinion, it’s just a funny, stupid ad which has a logical contradiction by itself.

Answer 1

Creative and Stupid Ad
An old couple, dancing exaggerated and singing:” No gifts receiving this year, gifts received only Melatonin（脑白金）.” This is the famous ad of Melatonin, which we can see in almost every channel of our television. It seems all Chinese know this ad.
It’s hard to deny that it is the most successful ad for commercial. First, single words with the name of its product, make it easy for customers to memory. And the exaggerated dance of the old couple, especially the old lady who wears sexy underwear sometime, make the ad even impossible to forget. Second, it gives customers obvious implication, or even instruction. As a customer, every year, we Chinese will go to see our parents with gifts. So what gifts this year? When thinking about this, the famous ad line arouses,” No gifts receiving this year, gifts received only Melatonin.” This will have a big influence on customers’ choice. Third, unlike many ads, it neither boasts about its function, nor tells you the truth that the only function of Melatonin is that it helps people to keep a regular sleep pattern. For this time, silence speaks.
But in my opinion, it’s just a funny, stupid ad which has a logical contradiction by itself.
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Answer 2

In my opinion最后一句。。天啊好长。。终于看完了。。
第一行 exaggeratedly 还有广告词翻译的有点怪，个人意见：“No need any other gift, Melatonin only.”
第二行 the改成a which can be watched OR which can be found on OR which is broadcasted on almost .......
3. on TV all Chinese---everyone knows this advertisement.
4.commercial ad
5.make前面逗号可以不用
6。who wore 可改成 wearing 后面可以考虑用impressive
7 an obvious
8 what is the gift of this year
many many ads改成 unlike some other本回答被提问者采纳

Answer 3

An old couple, dancing in an exaggerated way and singing:” No gifts this year but Melatonin（脑白金）.” This is the famous ad of Melatonin, which we can see in almost every channel of our television. It seems to be universally known to all Chinese.
It’s hard to deny that it is a most successful ad for commercial. First, the repetition of the name of the product resonates with the customers no matter they like it or not. And the exaggerated dance of the old couple, especially the old lady who wears sexy underwear sometimes further reinforce the impressiont. Second, it gives customers obvious implication, or even instruction. As a custom, every year, we Chinese will visit our parents and send them various gifts. So what to send this year? While thinking about this, we will naturally recall the famous ad slogan,”No gifts this year but Melatonin.” This will definitedly exert a great influence on the customers’ choice. Third, unlike many ads, it neither boasts about its function, nor tells you the truth that the only function of Melatonin is it helps people to sleep better. This time, silence speaks.
But in my opinion, it’s just a funny, stupid ad which somehow contradicts itself.

Answer 4

"No gift accepted this year but only Melatonin（脑白金）.”

But in my opinion

Answer 5

make the ad even impossible make改成makes本回答被网友采纳