请帮我检查下我的作文 （不用管中文 帮我看下语法 单词有没错就行 时态是一般现在时与过去时)

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请帮我检查下我的作文 （不用管中文 帮我看下语法 单词有没错就行 时态是一般现在时与过去时) 大小写我就不分了 Jake likes helping others. he is good at repairing bikes. so he bought old bikes and fixed them up. then ,he gave them away to poor kids . he learn phycics well. so he gave lessons to primary school students. he also sing well. so he went to children's hospital on saturday and cheer sick children up. he love animals . so he wrote articles to protect animals and raised money for pandas

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Jake likes helping others. he is good at repairing bikes. so he bought old bikes and fixed them up. then ,he gave them away to poor kids . he learns phycics well. so he gave lessons to primary students. he also sings well. so he went to children's hospital on Saturday and cheered sick children up. he loves animals so he wrote articles to protect animals and raised money for pandas本回答被提问者采纳

Answer 2

ake likes helping others. he is good at repairing bikes. so he buys old bikes and fixes them up. then ,hegives them to the poor kids . he is good at phycics . so he teaches primary school students. he also sings well. so he goes to the children's hospital on saturday and cheer sick children up. he love animals . so he writes articles to protect animals and raises money for pandas。
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为什么呢 应该是他过去修啊

为什么呢 应该是他过去修啊

那用一般过去式也没错吧

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给分啊 亲

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