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Question

Should the university campus be open to tourists?
Nowadays, the famous university campus has become a new hot spot to visit. According to the recent survey conduct by CCTV, hundreds and thousands peoples go to visit the university campus every year.
But more people start worry about open campus will take many problems. For instants, too much visitors will bread the quit, so that student can not study care.
The others says , open campus is a good idea for school financial .and it is very exciting and meaningful to high school children.
In my opinion , the university campus be open to tourists, that is pros outweigh the cons .just limit the number of tourists ,university students have clean environment and the tourists have nice travel.
不好意思，好像是我发错地方了。我是想大家帮我修改一下。不是翻译。不好意思哈！

Answer 1

大学校园应该向游客开放么？
现如今，著名大学校园又已经成为一个热点。根据央视最近的一个调查显示，每年都有成百上千的人去参观大学校园。
但是，越来越多的人开始担心大学的开放式校园会带来很多问题。对现在来说，太多的游客会引起学生们不认真学习的现象。
又有一部分人说，开放式校园是增加学校财政的一个好方法，这对于高校学生来说是非常有益的。
我认为大学校园向游客开放是一个趋势，只要能限制游客的数量，学生们也能学习好，同时，游客们也能有一个愉快的旅行。

大致翻译了一下。。。。。
貌似有些句法和语法上有点错误。。。。。。。。
回去再改改吧。。。。。注意以下动词时态，还有句子语态。。。。

Answer 2

大学校园应该对游客开放吗？
现如今，著名大学校园已经成为一个新奇的，热的参观景点。最近，根据由CCTV组织的调查当中，每年都有成百上千，成千上万的人们去参观大学校园。
但是，更多的人们开始担心开放大学将会带来好多问题。
还有一些人们可能说，开放学校对于学校资金是一个好主意并且对于高校的孩子们来说也是激动人心和有意义的。
以我的观点来看，大学校园应对游客开放，也就是说优点会胜过缺点，但是只要限制游客的数量，大学生才能有干净的环境，游客也会有一次愉快的旅程。本回答被网友采纳

Answer 3

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But more people start worrying about opening campus will take many problems. For instants, too much visitors will break the quit, so that student can not study carefully.
The others says , opening campus is a good idea for school finance .and it is very exciting and meaningful to high school children.
In my opinion , the university campus is open to tourists, which is pros outweigh the cons .just limit the number of tourists ,and university students have clean environment at the same time the tourists have a nice travel..本回答被提问者采纳