第1个回答 2011-04-16
Dear Helen,
How are things going with you? I'm going to tell you something about me.
Today is a sunny day and every one is in a good mood. At the moment, my mother is cleaning the rooms, my father is watching TV, and my little sister is talking by the phone.
And I am writing to you at my desk. Out of my window, I can see the police station in the opposite street. In the bright sunshine, it looks great.
I am looking forward to your reply.
yours,
Jim
不知道你要什么样的内容，什么难度的啊？我只写了这篇很简单很简单的信。等下我有时间了再给你写一篇，可能那个会比较出人意料的~过1个小时以后我来发，现在有点事···
Dear Helen,
How is everything going with you? I am going to tell you something that you can never imagine: I and my family are having the worst day---we are robbed!
Yesterday evening we went to my aunt's to have the Thanksgiving Day and we returned home this morning. When the door was opened, what presented before our eyes was a total mess!All the doors of our rooms, the cabinet, draws and chests were open! My father immediately called the police and they came from the police station in just 10 minutes.
And now it's 3 p.m., the policemen have just finished the investigation, and my mother is cleaning the rooms. My father is watching TV, on which it's said that about 20 families were robbed yesterday. My sister is talking about the accident in our house by the phone. And I am sitting at the desk and writing to you. Though today is sunny, I feel so terrible. I hope you won't have such bad luck.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Jim
我刚刚修改的，不知道下面这段你感觉怎么样呢？呵呵，我只是发挥了一下下想象力~~本回答被提问者采纳