假设你是李华,你刚参加了某培训学校组织的“英语夏令营”活动,请根据以下内容,写一封投诉信。

[写作内容]

1、原以为可以通过这个课程提高英语成绩,但一个班有60多个学生,学生练习的机会大大减少;
2、课程内容简单,话题不够新颖,难以调动学生英语学习的兴趣;
3、学校没有午餐供应,每天都要走30分钟的路程,到最近的饭店吃饭;
4、学校曾在广告中宣传,会组织丰富的实践活动,但学校仅组织了一次羽毛球比赛;
5、描述你参加该活动后的心情和提出你的赔偿要求。

[写作要求]

只能使用5个句子表达全部内容(信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总句数)。

不要范文。麻烦快点 要自己写的阿

第1个回答  2013-06-27
To whoever organised this English Camp, I am one of your recent participants of the "English Summer Camp". This letter I wrote to you is to express my utter disppointment to these poorly organised activities I have suffered, which were awfully different from what I had previously expected. (1) Firstly, the purpose for attending this camp is mainly to make a significant improvement in my English, which, however, was not exactly improved by this, because in my class I am with another 60 students, provided with little opportunities for each student. (2) Secondly, the contents of the course of which we were studying, appeared to only include some old and outdated topics, most of which I think is clearly not attractive enough for us to pay much attention on it. (3) Besides, the school did not provide anything to eat whatsoever at lunch, forcing all of us to take a 30-minute walk to the nearest restaurant and having some food that we still needed to pay for them. (4) In addition, with the promise of plenty extra-curriculum activities, I cannot understand that the only extra-cirriculum activity is merely a badminton competition. (5) So I was seriously annoying by this disgusting camp of which you organised it over a few weeks ago, and considering this camp as not only an irresponsible wrongdoing, but also a violation of law, for which you deliberately deceive consumers by false information you've given us in order to persuade us to join in, and I am asking a full refund, and hoping you know what the right things to do.
第2个回答  2013-06-27
Dear leaders:
I am a university student Li Hua. To participate in "English Summer Camp " The purpose is to improve our English, did not expect the course utterly, boring. Not expected to promote the rich curriculum. The activities of the school of their false propaganda to mislead the consumer a serious violation of our legal rights. We strongly on the fraud charges refund of activities, please give us the relevant departments to make the school a reasonable solution.