英语 书面表达

每个人都不可能没有烦恼。当你有烦恼的时候,有试着控制你的情绪吗,因为情绪可以影响你上火中的很多方面。所以在生活我们应当相信自己,笑对人生,多与父母、朋友沟通。
请展开你丰富的联想,写一篇短文。
要求:意思连贯、通顺,词数在60~80之间。
提示词语:feel happy, mirror, the best, help others in need, believe, have a nice day, express, feelings, believe, talk with......

It seems to be more and more difficult to feel happy all the time in such a pressure world.Everyone may have some trouble nowdays.It's necessary for we students to get to know how to get over it.
First we have to know how to control our emotion.A calm emotion is the key to have a more comfortable life.When we are in bad spirit,I think we can look into the mirror and smile to that self in it,smiling and telling the words"I believe I have a nice day."We can also do something else to draw away our attention such as to help others in need.
Sometimes when we can't handle our emotion we need to talk with our parents and friends.Learning how to express our feelings help them understand us better.Remember there is always a person to help us out.
Being brave to face the trouble in our life makes life better!

自己写的,检查了一下大致没什么错误,给你几点小提醒。
1.we students是同位语结构,意思是我们学生,以此类推。我们青少年:we teenagers.
2.be in bad spirit的意思是情绪不好,固定结构。
3.draw away one's attention的意思是分散某人注意力,固定结构。
4.help sb. out的意思是帮助某人解脱困境,固定结构。

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第1个回答  2013-02-09
Everyone would be worried in his lifetime.When i'm in trouble and feel bad,i try my best to control my emotion.Because i know that it is bad for my health of body and spirit.So we should believe in ourselves when in trouble.We should keep smiling when face to the life.I have some suggestions above this.We can talk with our friends or parents to share our sadness and ask for some help.And we also need to help others in need,too.However,we should have confidence towards life.Remember one thing that who wants to succeed will find a way,those don't will find an excuse.

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