第1个回答 2017-02-08
1. Handwriting is of great importance.
在高考作文的评卷中，评卷老师的“感情分”是考生必须争取的。评卷老师对作文卷面的印象直接关系到考生作文得分的档次。因而，在平时的书写中就要刻意加强书写方面的训练，以求书写工整清楚，字体美观大方。从第一印象去“征服”评卷老师。（附衡水中学学生作文）
From the media, we got aware that the earthquake and rerrible tsunami accompanied had caused thousands of people dead and tens of thousands of people homeless.
On hearing the shocking news. my heart brake. Immediately, your smiling face flashed in my mind and I rushed to the telephone to dial your number, however, it couldn't get through. How I wish you are all in safety!
How similar the situation id with what Wenchuan faced in 2008!To our delight, Wenchuan has been recoverying with an optimistic attitude. I believe that with the international help, you will rebuild your home and regain a happy life!
实战演练
How is everything going? As you are interested in the Chinese customs at table. I am more than glad to expose you to the fantastic culture of China.
Generally speaking. Guests are regarded as the centre on such an occasion. As a consequence. The host will lead the guests to their seats first. Besides, it's the guests who are supposed to try the first taste. What's more, as is known. It is typical of Chinese to use chopsticks and we all are accustomed to making no noise. Last but noe least , a polite guest never forgers to express thanks for the warm trear . As the old saying goes, do in Rome as the Romans do. When you pay a visit. Bear in mind to respect the customs.
2. Good beginning and ending.
大家都知道“Well begun is half done（良好的开端是成功的一半）”。高考书面表达属指导性写作，从历年的试题来看，都有一定的材料提示，而且有明确的字数限制。所以开头宜开门见山，直奔主题。同时要对你所写的第一个句子慎之又慎，确保不出任何错误，最好能作到引人入胜。另外文章能否得高分，结尾也很关键。好的结尾能起到画龙点睛的作用，也能使阅卷老师的眼睛为之一“亮”，这样的作文，高分非你末属。至于说怎样结尾，应根据不同体裁的文章而定，或总结全文，或表明对所写人物的态度，或适可而止，水到渠成。英语书面表达常见的开头形式大致有以下几种：
1）．开门见山，揭示主题：文章一开头，，就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。例如下面是题为"Honesty"(谈诚实)一文中的开头：
Honesty is one of the best virtues．An honest man is always trusted and respected．On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a "liar"，and is looked upon by honest people．
2）．交代人物、事情、时间或环境开头：在文章的开头，先把人物、事件和环境交待清楚。例如"A Trip to Taishan" (去泰山旅游)的开头：
The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Taishan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.
3）.概括性的开头：即对要在文章中叙述的人或事先作一个概括性的介绍。如“The Happiness of Reading Books”(读书的快乐)的开头：
People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. But I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power.
3. Your composition should be divided into three or four paragraphs.
注意篇章结构，合理布局
开始部分（opening paragraph）——说出文中的要点、核心问题。
正文部分（Body paragraphs）——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。
结尾部分（concluding paragraphs）——对全文的总结和概括。
4. You’d better use some linking words, some advanced words and varied sentence patterns.
▲ Some basic writing skills:
1）.句子要正确
改正下面的句子：
Do you know where is the People’s Park ?
________________________________________________________?
There are many visitors enjoy the dish.
________________________________________________________.
Will you give me a favor?
______________________________________________?
How do you think of the speech made by the engineer?
________________________________________________________?
2).句子要平行
改写下面的句子：
In my spare time, I enjoy popular music and collecting stamps.
__________________________________________________________________
I prefer the quiet countryside to live in the noisy cities.
________________________________________________________________
3).句子要避免过多重复.
例如：You will continue to walk. You’ll see a hill. You will go around the hill. You’ll get to a lake.
→Walking for a while, you’ll come to a hill, then walk round to the other side of the hill. There you’ll see a lake.
He is a boy. He is handsome. He is from Hangzhou.
___________________________________________________________________
4).句子要避免汉语式英语
(1) My spare lovers are swimming, skating, collecting stamps and listening to popular music.
→In my spare time, I enjoy swimming, skating……
In my spare time,______________________________________________________________
In my spare time,______________________________________________________________
(2) In fact, the man’s age is very young.
→ In fact, _______________________________________________.
(3) My work is too busy and I can’t come.
→ __________________________________________________________________.
(4) The old woman’s left eye is blind.
→ __________________________________________________________________.
▲ Ways of writing:
方法一：一句多译
例如：他们一到机场就受到了热烈的欢迎。
1) As soon as they arrived at the airport, they were warmly welcomed .
2) _______________had they arrived at the airport ____________ they were warmly welcomed.
3) __________________ had they arrived at the airport __________ they were warmly welcomed.
4) ___________ arriving at the airport , they were warmly welcomed .
5) They were warmly welcomed ______________________________ they arrived at the airport.
方法二.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档
1）.面对困难时，他从不放弃。
______________________________________________ difficulties, he never gives up.
2）.引入市场后，该产品大获成功。
______________________________________________, the product made a great success.
3）.做完作业后，他回家了。
_______________________________________________, he returned home.
方法三. 使用丰富的句式
1）I failed in the exam again.
What disappointed me most was that I failed in the exam again.
2） He was poor, but he was happy.
___________________________ he was poor, he was happy.
3）.We all like our English teacher.
We all like our English teacher, who is a __________________________________ woman.
4).All my classmates work very hard.
In order to ____________________________________, all my classmates work very hard..
方法四：多用连接词
1). The students and teachers in our class were invited to the party.
_________________the students _________________ the teachers were invited to the party.
2). She learns quickly, and she remembers what she has learnt.
She learns quickly, _______________________, she remembers what she has learnt.
3).Children need organized activities, and they need time and freedom to relax.
On the one hand, children need organized activities. _________________________________, they also need time and freedom to relax.
总结
俗话说：不打无准备之仗。要想写好高考的书面表达,平时就要作好各方面的准备工作。在平时的学习中,要在以下几个方面多下功夫：
⑴ 加强语言基础知识的学习和训练。
①要有足够的词汇量；
②要掌握好英语的五种基本句型；
③要把握基本的语法知识,如：动词的时态和语态、主谓一致、非谓语动词的使用、形容词/副词的比较等级等等；
④熟悉习惯用语和习惯搭配；
⑤注意相似词语、易混词语的辨析。
⑵ 多背诵一些范文,多练笔。
多读一些国内外的优秀文章，乃至背诵一些范文，以拓宽思路，开阔视野，还能自觉杜绝中国式英语。