An Environmental Management System is a holistic strategy and process to identify,track and manage the environmental impacts of your facility over time.While it's possible to make incremental environmental improvements at your facility without a comprehensive plan,your facility can only maximize environmental performance by setting a long-term strategy that will inform decision-making on environmental management.
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第二句翻得不好。“尽管......但是”?不觉得这句有转折关系
经搜索查询,while用在句首确实有“尽管”的意思。虽然要修改追问,还是保留之前的追问吧,以作自省。另请问“that will inform decision-making on environmental management.”修饰的是什么?如果是long-term strategy,感觉你最后一句的翻译就对不上了。
that will inform decision-making on environmental management修饰的是long-term strategy。怎么翻译就对不上了?
尽管在缺乏全面计划的情况之下,你的设施亦可实施渐进式的环境改善,可是,只有通过制定可为环境管理决策提供信息的长期策略,你的设施才可将环境绩效提高至极限。
之前翻译最后"从而"那一句,我觉得意思会有所偏差。修改后比之前的要准确易理解。谢谢解答。