英文翻译 求翻译的文采些 能使外国人看懂又有意境的翻译

迷恋于注视的温情
妖艳 魅惑 张扬 柔媚

繁华落尽 温婉告别
留下一袭曼妙的背影

梦醒时分
只是一场华丽的转身
终结在经典的绚烂

试译:
fascinated by your tenderness when your
eye are on me.
your stunning charm, your enchanting boldness.

When the curtain magnificantly went down, you whispered me a goodbye.
What an attractive figure you've impressed in my mind!

Well, it turned out to be a fragile dream,
it was about your turn-back elapsed in pageant,
just wound up at the most brilliant moment...
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