请用像kepp one's promise一类的短语或句子
还有,结构我给你:第一段 直接写出观点,再加以简单叙述
第二段 用The first,the second,the third 来说明遵守诺言的好处
第三段 总结
麻烦了,谢谢,好的话加20分
绝不骗您 一定要今天,明天我就考试了
呃......
我不要这种那一件事来写的
请用像kepp one's promise一类的短语或句子
还有,结构我给你:第一段 直接写出观点,再加以简单叙述
第二段 用The first,the second,the third 来说明遵守诺言的好处
第三段 总结
谢谢
呃...
把你的细节改改
写得十分不错,加分是一定的
好,我再改改
Keep our promise is abide by promises, pay attention to credit.Keep the promises you make is everyone should do.
What is promise? promisey is a good quality of being honest. It is a fine virtue for everyone. A man of promiseis loved by all. Without ipromise, he will lose the best friend. so we must keep our promise and do us best.
The first ,promiseis especially important for students. As,a student,we should finish our homework independently. We must return books when it is due. We should listen to the teacher carefully no matter what kind of lesson it is.The second,during the daliy life,if we have committed myself and must keep our promise,The third ,If we promise to do something, we should try our best to do it well.
After all,whenever we should keep our words.Promise is everyone should be needed.Then the world will become more and more beautiful.
字数多了,你把不要的自己删去,第2 段没什么用好像