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Question

请大家在这篇短文中找出10处错误并改正，谢谢！Mrs Brown is only 32 years old but is in a diet.She is a 120-kilogram heavily woman."You must not eat meat, sweets or cakes," her doctor said to her. Her husband promised that she will stop Mrs Brown made a mice big cake amd in a few minute she finished with it. Then she feared that her husband would angry. She made another cake quickly but couldn`t help eat half. When Mr Brown came back after having a walk, he saw the half cake left but was happy.

Answer 1

1. 第一句不应该用but,上下文并无转折之意
2. 第二句heavily，不对，应为heavy
3. must not, 更改为need not
4. Her husband promised that she will--would
5.she finished with it, 去掉with
6. husband would 加be angry
7.8.couldn`t help 加 to eat 加a half
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