第1个回答 2006-07-01
In class,Mr.Piewrre described him:这里的him有歧义,不知道你指的是Mr.Piewrre还是另外一个老师。如果指Mr.Piewrre应该用himself。另外表示自我介绍应该用“introduced himself"较妥。
what we wanted to knew这里的what我认为改用which,that比较好,关于questions的定语从句。
When he thought his or her question was great,he will gave him or her chocolate
你的意思是当他认为你们的问题提得好得时候他会奖励你们巧克力,但是为什么叙述语气突然变了呢?还是改为When he thought our questions were great,he will gave us chocolate
其他的一时看不出什么问题,in a word就是基本没问题啦
不过文章还是写得。。。
第2个回答 2006-07-01
首先,整篇文章都是过去时,4楼的观点不对,不是过去任为的意思,只是前后时态要统一
其次,in class没有错,是固定短语"在课上"
insect是昆虫的意思,没有错.
而奖励chocolate只是给某一个人,并不是全部,所以可以不用our
在哪一天,是先月再日,没有错,May 29th 5月29号,
4楼犯有严重错误,kind of的意思是有几分,a kind of是一种,她写的没错,不需要加a
第3个回答 2006-07-01
Mr.Piewrre described him
described--->introduced himself (to us)
what we wanted to knew--->
about what we wanted to know
When he thought his or her question was great,he will gave him or her chocolate.But that made the class very noisy,so I didn't think that's so great.---->
When he thought it's a good question, he gave a chocolate to the student. And it made the class noisily, so I didn't think it's a good idea.
Next--->Then
Chinese--->China's
He sang it for us.
for--->with
The song was great
great--->pleasant
It was kind of funny ,so I loved it.
so--->and
In a word,I liked this class.Beacuse I think it was interesting.---->
I think it was an interesting class ,and I like it.本回答被提问者采纳
第4个回答 2006-07-01
On May 29th we had an English class by Piewrre and another teacher.
In class,Mr.Piewrre introduced himself and as well we asked him what we wanted to know.He gave them the chocolates,whose questions were great,but that made the class a bit noisy,so I don't think it's good.Then Mr.Piewrre showed some pictures to us about Chinese culture,society and economy.He also taught us a English song,and he sang it for us.I enjoyed it much.At last we saw a documentory about insects.It was really interesting,and I love it very much.I hope I can have more chances to communicate with foreign teachers and enjoy the learning of English.