In conclusion, as far as I am concerned that effective learning method is that combine reading with positive program and useful websites, which can comprehensively foster children's language ability and motivate their imagination.
>前半句不通，感觉像是词汇生搬硬套，堆上去的。
>一些语法错误。
>句子结构较差，并且有些过于长了。长度实际上没关系，但是把短语过多地连接起来会造成意味不明。要长，得先保证把短语之间的联系挑明了。
>请问为何要加入"As far as I am concerned"？意思明白，请问用处是？请参考上条。请适当考虑是否要把它加入这段话里。
In conclusion, (as far as I am concerned,) the effective learning method would be to combine reading with positive program and useful websites. It can comprehensively foster children's language ability and motivate their imagination.
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