第1个回答 2010-06-21
我找到的关于世博的范文给你了:
Shanghai World Expo
In my opinion, the Expo is a large and grand ceremonies. I can imagine that in Shanghai, has no national boundaries, away from all over the world people are discussing the changes here, not only the environment has become more sanitary, and construction is getting better and better. Following the Olympic Games after the motherland and the people is the second one is excited event
Shanghai World Expo, construction of the "Shanghai World Expo Park" is also careful planning, it is estimated there is a permanent exhibition hall. My favorite is the mascot of World Expo - Hai Bao. This is an aqua blue again with a dynamic elf. Hoi Po's image and self-confidence to use both arms warm smile welcomes friends from around the world. Hoi Po is a Chinese character "person" as a core creative, because only supported one another throughout the world, man and nature. Man and society. Harmony among people, so that the city will be better.
I'm looking forward to Shanghai World Expo held in Shanghai has been constantly progressing, people of the motherland is also injected into the Expo. Olympics. I believe that the Expo would surely be the same as the Olympic Games a complete success, has become so difficult for other countries to replace the state, win glory for the whole of China! I hope I can do something for the World Expo, in order to cheer the arrival of the Expo bar!
第2个回答 2010-06-22
这是我自己写的,基本上全对,但不排除有语法错误的可能
Dear xiaoming
how have you been?
I heard you had finished school,i'd like to tell you something about your coming secondary school life.
First,you should listen to teacher carefully in classes and you need to take notes.you also need to ask questions that you do not understand ,too.you must finish your homework by yourself.And read English loudly every morning.
Second, you should spend more time on the subjects that you are weak in.
Third,you ought to pay attention to your fitness.you need to do more exercises.
Finally,you must have enough sleep,or you will be sleep the next day
These are my advice,I hope it can help you.
Yours
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第3个回答 2020-04-02
If
I
were
a
teacher
now,I
would
not
teach
students
only
from
lessons.I
would
lead
them
play
with
me
.We
would
play
guessing
games
and
practising
things
from
them。Stdents
could
be
more
clever
than
before
and
they
could
learn
a
lot
of
things
that
they
don't
know
before.
We
could
play
football.When
we
were
playing
they
could
be
stronger
and
healthier
than
before
and
they
could
learn
how
to
act
as
a
team.We
would
play
everything
we
like.Everybody
would
be
happy.They
wouldn't
let
class
over.
如果我是老师,我就不只从课本里教学生,我将领着他们玩.我们可以玩猜谜游戏、动手能力,从中学生可以学到许多以前没接触过的东西,他们会变得比以前更聪明.我们可以玩踢足球,从中学生会变得更强壮和更健康,而且他们会学到怎么作为一个队去踢球.我们会玩我们喜欢的东西.每个人都很快乐.以至于他们不让课程结束.
第4个回答 2020-01-24
我也是初三学生,本人英语很好,单元100满分没下过92,大考120满分,没下过108。作文最多扣1分。英语能力竞赛2篇作文共扣3分。
请问作文是多少字的?是否要写出你对他的建议?