如何提高英语作文文采

Question

我是一个即将面临中考的学生。英语老师曾经说过，英语的作文有文采分。虽然我平时英语作文扣的分数不是很多，但是我所写出来的英语作文太过于平淡，几乎没有多少文采。我想请问如何提高英语作文文采？

Answer 1

中学的英文作文相对还是比较简单的，如果想增加文采的话，建议可以从两方面下功夫：
1.因为英语注重“形合”，文句之间的关联词，使整个文章更有条理。例如：1) 先后次序关系：at this time; first; second; next；at last; eventually；finally；first of all； to begin with；to start with；to end with； since then；
2) 因果关系：because；because of this； since； as； for； owing to； due to； for this reason; as a result of this； therefore；；as a result； thus； hence； so；so that...； under these conditions;
3) 转折关系：but；；however；though；even though； despite that； in spite of；
4) 并列关系： and; also；too；as well as；either...，or...；both...and...
5) (补充)递进关系： furthermore； In this way ; not only...but also...； not...but...； in addition (to)； besides； as far as I am concerned; in other words； on the one hand...，on the other hand...； as a poplar saying goes...；in order to do it...; meanwhile； at the same time； In the first place...，in the second place...;
6) 比较关系： similarly; compared with；... rather than...，by doing so ；both…and...; in the same way; not only...but (also).
7) 对照(不同点)：yet; still; rather; neither ... nor; although; though; but; however; yet; unlike； by way of；on the contrary； nevertheless; while; on the other hand.
8) 举例关系:for example； for instance； in this case; namely； as you know； you may as／say； as he explains； like； such as； in particular；including...；for one thing...，for another...； I will say...； I would like to...； in this situation; take -----for example； as for； as to； according to; on this occasion.
9) 强调关系：in fact; especially；particularly； what is more important； in reality； certainly; of course; indeed; in particular； believe it or not； it is certain that...；to be strict; to be true； definitely; undoubtedly; without a doubt; obviously, not only.. but(also...), both... and... ,to tell the truth
10) 条件关系: if；unless; supposing that；if it is the case；in this sense；once...；if possible；if necessary；if so；if not all; if anything.
11) 归纳总结类： in other words；on the whole; therefore； in short；in brief；to sum up；in summary； to conclude； for this reason; in short. generally speaking
12) 地点关系：beyond; opposite to; at the same place; there; over; in the middle; in front of; in the distance; farther; here and there; above; below; at the right;
13) 目的关系： for this purpose; in order that; in this way, since; so that; on that account; in case; for the same reason.
14) 重申关系：in other words; that is to say; again; once again. What’s more
15) 结果关系thus; hence; therefore; under these conditions; as a result; because; because of; so that; not only...but (also...); so... as to.
16) 顺序关系：first; second; thirdly; next; then; following this; at this time; now; at this point; after; afterward; after this; lastly; finally; before this;
17) 时间关系：at once; immediately; in the mean time; meanwhile; at the same time; in the end; then; soon; not long after; later; at once; at last; finally; some time ago; at present; all of a sudden; from this time on; from time to time; since then; when; whenever; a few minutes later; as; once; since; occasionally; in a moment;

2.在文章中使用2~3个习语或成语，会使你的文章有旁征博引的味道，绝对能使你的文章增色不少。但是习语也注意一定要引用恰当，不然反而适得其反。所以习语一定要自己弄明白用法，跟自己的文章主题相关联。例如：
love me, love my dog.爱屋及乌
love is blind. 爱情是盲目的
Do't throw the baby out with the bath water.
Let bygones be bygones.
Birds of a feather flock together.
A friend indeed is a friend in need.
等等。可以在百度上搜一下。 这类东西很多，可以捡一些比较使用的自己记一些。

Answer 2

多看书，看好书。我指的不只是英文书，其实语言都是通的，多看中文书一样能提高英语作文水平，只需将脑子里优美的想法和文采转化为英语就行了，所以增大词汇量也是很关键的~~

Answer 3

现有文，就是英文，才能有采，也是英文。用中文是学不出英文文采的。

要达到能用英文想就能想出文采了。照抄别人的，没用。

Answer 4

套用好的句型 使用高级词汇 多使用连接词 使文章看起来通畅