我已经收到您的email了,我很好,您好吗?我会将您的这个学生的名字和护照号码告诉周总,然后给您一个回复。谢谢 我的翻译如下:(我的英文不好,看看有什么错误没?请指出来。) I have received your email.I am fine,How are you ?I will tell manager zhou your students'name and the passport number,and give you a reply.thanks!
I have already received your email.I am fine,and you?I will tell the boss Mr Zhou your student's name and the passport number,and then give a reply for you.thank you! 应改的地方有: 1.我很好,您好吗用:I am fine,and you? 2.这个学生的名字:your student's name (这个学生——明显是单数) 3.and 改为and then 更贴切 (注:and then 表示然后,前后句子衔接比较紧密 then是之后的意思,前后句子相隔一些时间 )
你的翻译基本正确哈。有个小错误:students' 应该是 student's I have received your email.I am fine,How are you ?I will tell Manager Zhou your student's name and passport number,then I'll give you a reply.Thanks!