谁教我小学英语作文啊？

Question

假如你是Lisa，上个周末时你和你的家人一起购物的日子，请用不少于五个句子70个单词来描述你们购物的情况。（谁给我英文，还要写上中文啊）

Answer 1

Last weekend my parents and I went to the nearby shopping mall and we had a memorable family day. I had been wishing to get my favourite idol's CD album since last month and finally my mum bought it for me. I was so exhilarated because it's the first time my mum agree to buy an album for me. Later on my mum chose a tie for my dad and it suits him well. It was such a memorable day and i wish i can have some more weekends with my family in future...
上周末，我父母和我去附近的商场和我们有一个难忘的家庭日。我一直希望得到自上个月以来我最喜欢的偶像的CD专辑，最后我妈妈为我买了。我是如此兴奋，因为这是第一次，我妈妈同意我买的专辑。后来我母亲选择了我父亲的纽带，它很适合他。也正是这样一个值得纪念的日子，我希望我能与我的未来家庭的一些周末...
可以不？

Answer 2

Last weekend my parents and I went to the nearby shopping mall and we had a memorable family day. I had been wishing to get my favourite idol's CD album since last month and finally my mum bought it for me. I was so exhilarated because it's the first time my mum agree to buy an album for me. Later on my mum chose a tie for my dad and it suits him well. It was such a memorable day and i wish i can have some more weekends with my family in future...

呃本人英文不好，大家也找找语法错误...
至于翻译，你自己翻译吧，小心老师让你逐个字解释你就完啦

帅气米老鼠886 有你这么翻译的么..tie 是领带，，我希望我能与我的未来家庭的一些周末...别用软件嘛...
i wish i can have some more weekends with my family in future 是 我希望在未来可以跟家人度过跟多的周末...唉...

Answer 3

I went shopping with my mother last wenkend. We bought lots of things. We bought some toys,some chicken,some comedy books,an dictionary,and a post card . They cost thirty-two yuan. I like reading books that make you laugh. And we bought some fruits. The apples were sixty yuan. It is very expensive.

（翻译：上周末我和妈妈去逛街。我们买了好多东西。我们买了一些玩具，一些鸡肉，一些漫画书，一本字典和一张明信片。花了32.8元。我喜欢使人发笑的书。我们还买了一些水果。那些苹果60.13元，太贵了。）

老兄你的英语有待提高……
加油啊……
虽然我这篇作文没有70词，但差不多了啊^_^
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