我得讲一篇短文改错,但是我的英语水平很烂,请各位大神帮帮忙吧!改时写清为什么吧,最好详细点,谢谢!!
I have been play piano for four years.Last year when i heard the news which there was going to be a piano performance came up in a few weeks,I felt very nervous.Finally came that day.when we arrived at the concert hall,my hand started shaking expectedly.However,just looking at my teacher's warm face let him get back self-confidence.When it was my turn to perform,I go up the stage and played the piece from beginning to an end pleasantly.Soon,the cheers filled the concert hall.I felt very happy and very proud myself.That is my first piano performance,but I will never forget it for the rest of my life.
一共有十处错误,每句话不超过两处。
play--played
have been done 现在完成时 play为过去分词played
which--that
news引导同位语从句 连词应该用that
came--coming
performance 和come up为主动关系
hand--hands
两只手 所以复数
him-me
该短文主语是我
go--went
该短文为过去时态
proud+of
be proud of 对……自豪 固定词组
but--and
连词 翻译就可以
up--to
这个空不知道对不对
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