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求大神帮忙
内容不看,是要求

需要怎么改?语法有几个小问题。追问

看一下我也没有缺少的内容。错误的语法指出来

追答

内容的话可以自己检查,只要上面的词都用了就好。我认为的语法瑕疵:

    used to be afraid of

    help my classmates solve(to一般不写)

    bad and difficult things

    my shy classmates 或 one of my shy classmate

    they will make you successful

    A few minutes later

    grades(笔误)

    careful about the exams泛指

    you will get good grades

    change in my life is that I fall in

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