如何写好记叙文的六要素?

如题所述

创作思路:

确定中心,写出深意。我们要着于挖掘所写事件中含有的生活哲理或找出它闪光的地方,反复思考,确定文章的中心思想。

即善于从普通的小事中写出深意来。文章的六要素要交代清楚。一件事情的发生,离不开时间、地点、人物、事情的起因、经过和结果这六方面,即常说的“六要素”,只有交代清楚这几方面,才能使读者对所叙述的事,有个清楚、全面地了解。

范文如下:

Hildhood memories like a treasure chest, there are happiness and sadness, bitterness and sweetness, 

that unforgettable moment let me have endless aftertaste. I'll choose the sweetest story to tell you.

童年的往事就像个百宝箱,有快乐有悲伤,有苦涩有甜蜜,那难忘的瞬间让我回味无穷。我挑一个最甜蜜的故事说给你听。

It was the fourth grade, the hot summer ushered in a rare storm, the whole school was instantly involved in a black vortex, 

thunder and rain shook the earth, the gloomy sky, the original quiet campus into a confused place.

那是四年级的时候,炎炎夏日迎来了罕见的暴风雨,整个学校瞬间被卷入了一个黑色的旋涡中,雷声雨声震撼着大地,阴沉沉的天空下,原本宁静的校园变成了迷茫之地。

 At this time, when school was over, the waterfall like heavy rain made the students panic. 

Some were crying for their parents, some were scared to cry At this time, 

the most worried about me, should be my parents, they are also looking for me everywhere.

此时正值放学之际,那瀑布般倾泻下来的大雨,让同学们惊慌失措,一些哭着找父母,一些被吓得嚎嚎大哭……此时最担心我的,应该是我的爸爸妈妈,他们也在四处寻找着我。


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