【急求英语达人】求英语作文一篇：“怎么看待留学生出国”

Question

明天需要去澳洲学校做个小测试， 写篇200字左右小作文

题目大意为：如何看待留学生的出国问题，探讨型文章

急求英语达人，要求字数200左右，类似于雅思的大作文，有的请直接回复，或发邮箱 [email protected]

PS 最好原创，能否今年走成在此一举

Answer 1

Nowadays, there is a growing number of students choose to go abroad to have further study for the different education system. Some people think it’s such a difficulty that ask individual stay in a strange country alone, take care of itself, and far way from the homeland. What’s more, it takes much more money than educating in china. I have to admit that there are lots of obstacles and hardship; however, what the difficulty can bring to us is not categorically negative effect to our life. ‘The only tragedy of life is not what so much the man suffered, but what they missed’, the words from Thomas Carlyle illustrate my opinion. To be more specific, the difficulties are always come to our life with opportunities. Studying abroad can offer a chance to learn some different cultures; living alone can approve you independence; a different education produce more various choose for knowledge. Additionally, the international students have their own advantages on language skills and wilder horizon. All what I suffered is a precious experience of life, that’s the reason I want to be an international student.

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Answer 2

Advantages：It widens students' knowledge and horizons, meanwhile cultivats their independence and personalities. learn advanced knowledge and experience. Provides opportunities to students, who can learn advanced management experience. Then students have to deal with many problems whey they study abroad, thdy have to learn how to be accustomed to a new environment and how to get well with the teachers and classmates.By communicating with foreign students, they will see the differences from their own. Finally, can provide a good language environment and make it easy to pick up a language.
Disadvantages: students will confronted with many phychological problems. they feel lonely and helpness in a new environment.Futhermore, the tuition is too much , which is a heavy financial burden to the average people. Not only that, students may also experience homesickness when away from their families so long.
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