我要写一篇比较简单的英语自我介绍

Question

我的名字叫...，今年....，来自于..，我是一个技校的学生，我们学校是一个寄宿学校，我们学校很小，但是我很喜欢。
在我的家庭中，有四口人，我爸爸、妈妈、姐姐和我，我的家庭是一个很和睦的家庭，也是一个充满欢乐的家庭，他们给了我快乐，给了我幸福，他们很关心我，也很爱我，我也爱他们。
在我的班级里，大概有四十个学生，他们都来自于不同的地方，但是他们都很友善，我们是学计算机专业的，我们很喜欢计算机，我们学习很认真，也很努力。我在班上交了许多的朋友，我很高兴，因为我喜欢交朋友，我觉得朋友是生命中不可缺少的一不分。
这就是我。

Answer 1

My name is called.. This year... Comes from to. I am a professionalschool's student, our school is lodges the school, our school is verysmall, but I like very much. In mine family, some four people, my daddy, mother, the elder sisterand I, my family is a very harmonious family, also is fills the happyfamily, they have given me joyfully, has been happy for me, they arevery nice I, also loves me very much, I also loves them. In mine class and grade, probably some 40 students, they all come fromto the different place, but they very are all friendly, we are studythe computer specialized, we like the computer very much, we studyvery earnestly, also very diligently. I have delivered many friends inthe class, I very happy, because I like making the friend, I thoughtthe friend is in the life is essential one does not divide. This is I.

Answer 2

呵呵，好多语法毛病啊.这个应该好点.

My name is XX, i am XX years old from XX, i am a board student in a technical school.My school's small in size but i like it very much.

I have a happy family of 4-dad,mom,old sister and me,it's a happy and harmonious one which gives me so much happiness. I love my family who cares me,loves me and i love them in return.

There're about 40 students in my class who are from different places but are all very friendly. I major in computer and I love it. I study very hard. I have quite a few friends in my class which makes me happy because i like making friends and i really think friends is a indispensable part of life.

This's pretty much about me.

非常温馨非常不错自我介绍.