我是专科的,专业是国际会计,明年毕业,准备留学美国,今天办留学的公司打电话叫我写一篇个人个人陈述(Personal Statement),说外国学校要求。今天我自己试着把自己以前的一些经历写了一下,可惜英文太差,写得很不好。.我对这个也不熟,请各位大侠们帮帮忙! 可以帮忙改一下,或给些意见吗?
下面是我今天写的,还有好多单词不会翻译,见笑了。
1.I graduated from Shandong Institute of Business and Techonolygy.My major subject is International Accounting.During this period of time,I have taken the course on accounting systematically.
2.When I was young,I have studied Chinese painting and how to play flute and harmonica.I have gotten series of grade certificate.
3.In 2010,I participate in APEC and 葡萄酒节 as a volunteer.I wa picked out from 160 person luckily..During this period,I am responsible to organize the volunteers and allocate them responsibility.Our team won high praise from 店主 for our careful service.
I helped 店主 introduce her company’s sea food to others and work as a translator sometime.Through my efforts,half of my 摊位goods have been sold on the second day.
4.In the spare time,I like cooking,special in cooking sweet food,such as chocolate cake,pastry and caramel pudding.I also like doing handiwork.for example ,making a soft toy,making a earing,绣十字绣。
5.When I am on holiday,I often go to library to read.My favourate book is foreign literature and famous book,what hinding in the writer’s exquisite description is their emotion.
Everytimes I read the book again,I got different thoughts and feelings from it.About human nature,aspirmtion,fright and wish,I also like read books about nature and science,understand this wonderful world.
6.I planned to open a shop on network,which selling the handicraft and food I did.I will sell some finished product and have them made to customer’s order.I want to open it on Taobao,because as a old customer,I know buying and selling process better.How to get 性价比高 materials and how to deliver goods carefully is a problem.I find it that self-made goods always have a very hign price,because they have an originality,but lead to a low 销售量.
7.I was major member of school’s volleyball team, 在我上 senior high school 时.I like the feeling of run,leap and co-operate closely with my teammate.Once I was bone fracture of my wrist.After one week,I came back to the team to take part in the training determinedly.
文书申请中的最重要一环 - Personal Statement 个人陈述应该怎么写(上)