假设你的笔友（来自美国的Mike）下个月将到你校交流学习，请你把Mike的情况提前介绍给同学们。内容要点：1. Mike的家庭情况；2. Mike的性格特点和兴趣爱好；3. 同学对他的评价；4. Mike来中国的原因。注意：1. 字数70-80词；2. 短文中不得出现真实姓名。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version: My pen pal, Mike, will come to our school to study next month. He is an American. He is fifteen. There are three people in his family. His father is an engineer, and his mother is a teacher. He is outgoing and he likes to help others. In his free time, he likes listening to pop music and playing basketball. His parents and classmates all think he is a lovely boy. He wants to learn Chinese, and he loves Chinese food. That’s the reason why he will come to China. I hope you can make friends with him. |
试题分析： 用好连接词，注意段落间、句子间的连贯性。要做到所写文章层次分明，思路清晰，文字连贯，就需要在句与句之间，段与段之间架起一座座桥梁，而连接词起的正是桥梁作用。用词是否贴切，文法是否正确，句式是否多变，文采是否有生气，关系到写作者的语言功底和水平，但也有些窍门是需要长时间累积的。 【亮点说明】 本文在语言表达上清晰流畅，而且要点全面。文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如He is outgoing, In his free time, make friends with还运用了why引导的定语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：and等等。不仅反映出作者词汇的丰富，而且也使文章更加简洁明了，清晰易懂。 考点： |