满假设你是Tony,初中阶段的学习和生活即将结束，你的李老师陪伴你度过了三年校园生活。回顾其中的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请你用英语给他写封信，和他说说感激的心里话。要点提示：1.就要离别了,有很多心里话想说.2.回顾三年来,教师的辛勤劳动,教学有趣,,待人友好.3.和我们相处很好,生活上关爱我们,学习上严格要求我们.4.还记得当我考试失败时,鼓励我.生活上遇到难处时,帮助我.5.我们的学业有很大进步.给我们的太多太多,感激不尽.要求: 1. 词数80词左右.文章开头已给出.不计入词数.2 内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥,行文连贯。3．表达清楚，语句通顺，书写规范。参考词汇: work hard, friendly, fail in exams, encourage, make much progress.
| Dear Mr Li: I am leaving you and the lovely junior school life. I have so many words from my heart to say.You have been working hard for three years. I won’t forget that your class is so interesting. You are very friendly to us. You also get on well with us. You are strict with us in study and take care of us in life.I sill remember When I failed in exams, You encouraged me to keep trying. When I had trouble in life .You always helped me. With your help, We make much progress. You have given us so much.Thanks a lot for what you have done for us! All the best for you! Yours Tony |
| 试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要使用一般现在时和现在完成时，主语是第一人称。写作时注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题。同时适当使用复合句，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 【亮点说明】这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，使文章自然流畅。同时，使用了一些常用的句式和短语，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意积累，牢记一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 |