Last Sunday I was helping my father in his teahouse when a foreign visitor entered in.I greeted her with a warmly smile and talked with her in English.The young lady,who called her Judy,came from Canada.she told me that it was the first time she has been in China and so far she had enjoined her stay there.All the people she met in the country were friendly for her.In the late afternoon I showed her around our town.After she left,Judy thanked me for my kind.Besides,she praised me for my spoken English.
全篇只有10个错误 不要乱改。。。
能改几个算几个 本人急求答案
是with his teahouse 还是entered with?
last sunday I was... when ...entered=> last sunday when I was..., a foreign visitor entered in.
warmly => warm
who called her Judy=> herself
she has been in=> had been
she had enjoyed=>she enjoyed
her stay there=>here
were friendly for her=> to her
After she left=> before Judy left,
Judy thanked me=>she thanked me...
my kind=>kindness
第9个改和不改有区别么?。。。。
追答我觉得一句话中, 要先出现judy, 再出现代词she