各位大神，谁的英语比较地道，能帮我完善下我的句子吗？？谢谢！！在线等。

Question

good morning, i know you always been busy everyday.
if you don't mind, i'd like to give you some details here.
** hotel is looking for a well qulified professional for their general manager's position. you have freedom to chose your work place. my company would like to offer this position to you. (there must be a lot of recruiting company contact you before. please compare with us to think about it.)
would you like give us a chance? if so, may i ask you to send us your cv? we would like to know more about you. here's my email address:

Answer 1

Hi, good morning, I know you have been busy all the time and it would be sorry if this mail bores you .
I'd like to give you some detailed information about the position and hope you won't mind.
** hotel is looking for a well qulified general manager with feasible places of employment. My company would like to give you the offer. There must be a lot of recruiting companies contacting you before us and please compare and think about it).
Hope to get your positive response and if yes, may I have your cv? we would like to know more about you.
You can get me with the following contact information:
Tel:
Email:追问

虽然单词我都认识。。。但明显感到自己的不足。。。。（另外。。我怎么觉得主体段那么啰嗦。。）送上100悬赏，请笑纳。

Answer 2

这里是一份挖人的信，但是写的全部都是地道的中式英语。 而且写的姿态比较低，属于没有底气求人的那种，个人认为不合适。 很想直接翻译了，不过还需要时间斟酌一下。另外就20的悬赏实在是动力不足。。。。。。追问

那你就好好斟酌帮我改善一下。。。看回复添动力。

追答

DearXX,
Goodmorning. Thanks for your interest in the general manager position at XX hotel. AndI am writing to inform you that we would like to offer you the position. Pleasesend us your CV and a brief introduction.
Kindlyreply my email ASAP.
Bestregards
XXXXX

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