英语作文，急

Question

假如你是郑州第一中学的学生李华，你校的外教Tom今年十一打算出去旅游，请你以李华的名义写一封短信，为Tom提供旅游建议
十月一日，上午八点乘火车从郑州出发，去北京游览
十月二日，登长城
十月三日和四日，游览颐和园，逛商场购物
十月五日，乘飞机去华山游览
十月六日，早上看日出，下午返回
短文必须包括所有要点，可以适当加一些内容
词数一百左右

Answer 1

Dear Tom:
I'm Lihua in the first Middle school.Do you have a tour on November?I have a good trip plan for you.I hope you can to use .
The first day.In the moring at 8 o'clock ,you can take a train from Zhengzhou to Beijing go sighting.
The second day,you can go to the Great Wall,It's a great build,and it's a good place to have fun.
Do you know the Summer Palace?It's very beautiful.On the November 3rd and November 4th.We can go there
Huashan is a famous mountain.On the November 5th,we will go sighing there.
On the last day .In the morning，We can watch the sunrise.I think it's very nice,but in the afternoon we must to get back.
Do you like this plan?
Please write to me soon.

Lihua

翻译器毕竟只是一种程序，不能灵活运用，有的能把对的翻译成错的。
我有个同学就用了那个，结果第二天交上去后，老师升起地说他白教了。学过的句型不用，还不懂装懂，弄了点深奥德，全错，前言不搭后语。
于是那个同学受了批，狠狠地发誓自己再也不用翻译器了

我这个作文是自己写的，很费时间和精力的，能算个初中作文了，凑合着看吧！

Answer 2

...这作文太常见了.. 你自己组织语言..用谷歌在线翻译一下就可以了

Answer 3

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