Good morning. I am glad to be here for this interview. First let me introduce myself.My name is xxx, 24. I come from Hohhot, the capital of Inner Mongolia Antonomous Region . I graduated from the College of fine arts,xxUniversity two years ago, in 2010,majored in xx.
性格，爱好，实践经验
I am a open and bright humorous person with wide interests.I enjoy sports, games, films and books .For example, during the past four years in campers, I have invoved in some club and Design Society activities such as art festival, topic study, a variety of forum .Furthermore, I am interested in Interaction Design and multimedia presentation.In July 2009,I finished my graduation project with the national badge design and user interface design .In addition, I have also participated in some interactive projects about xxx （太空家园官）system in the 2010 World Exposition last year in work.
我是一个性格开朗兴趣广泛的女孩，我喜欢看电影，玩游戏，读书、游泳、滑雪。在大学期间经常参加一些社团活动和讲座沙龙，如设计协会研讨、电影周放映活动等等。大学毕业论文的题目是民族图腾对现代设计的启发，在此基础上我的毕业设计是图腾徽标设计以及多媒体互动展示。毕业后有一年的工作经历，参与了一些互动展项的设计，去年参观了世博会，使我很受启发。
The major that I hope pursue for my further education is Interaction Design.
these years ,with popularity of the Interaction Design ,A new epoch had begun for displaying design,and all of my experiences make me realize that Interaction Design has playing a role of national culture's expression.I think at present, I can do many things in a superficial level owing to lack of ample knowledge and ability. So I think further study is still urgent for me to achieve my gole .
近年来交互设计开启了展览展示设计的新篇章。我开始对多媒体展示（交互设计）对少数民族文化传播的影响产生浓厚兴趣，希望能在老师的指导下完成这一课题的研究并进修研究生学位。并且我会努力做到最好。
结束语OK, that’s all. Thank you very much
注意：时间紧迫截止到三月21号！！！因为忘设时限，弄错了！大家快帮忙啊~~~~要命呢~~~
英语不是强项，只希望文章短，好背好读，听起来不拗口，口语化一些最好。
谢谢~真希望给我回复的都送分！
谢谢您的修改，中括号里面的问号是什么意思啊？请问您修改之处是病句还是句型改造，我希望改过的文章简单通顺方便记忆，看完您改的文章感觉句子变多，变难了~不知哪些地方可以简化一下，口语感强一些，能麻烦您再看看吗 ？
追答中括号里面的问号是我不明白的地方: (a) school/college/university = 请选一; (b) [???On top of that, I also participated in some interactive projects about xxx （太空家园官）system in the 2010 World Exposition.???] =这不同于中文. 你可以删.
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修改如下:
I am an open-minded, cheerful person with wide interests. I enjoy sports, games, movies, books, swimming and skiing . During the four years in campus, I took part in many activities organised by clubs and Design Societies, such as art festivals, topics study, forums etc.
I am also very interested in Interactive Design and multimedia presentation. My graduation project was about national badge design and user interface design .
After I graduated, I worked for about a year with [xx 哪家公司?]. I gained experience in some interactive exhibition projects.
My visit to the 2010 World Expo was very useful in giving me ideas about my profession.
The major that I hope to pursue here is Interactive Design. I realize that this program is very popular now. I trust that with my experiences and knowledge gained from your [school/college/university?] I can to national culture's expression.
With my limited knowledge now I can't contribute much. So I think my enrollment at your esteemed [school/college/university?] is vital for me to achieve my goal. With guidance and supervision from the tutors/lecturers, I hope to complete my post-graduate studies. If given a place, I promise that I shall work hard to gain as much knowledge as possible from this [school/college/university?] . I want the qualification to serve my society and people.
I sincerely hope that my application will be considered favourably. Thank you very much for your kind consideration.
感谢您的意见，我头一次写，还是到处查资料，借鉴例句才写成这样，英语不是强项，只希望文章短，好背好读，听起来不拗口，口语化一些最好。必要之处还请您帮忙修改一下！
追答网友马来西亚亚戴的挺不错的
虽然短，但面试时一定要放慢速度，抑扬顿挫一些比较好，别紧张，祝你成功！！