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Question

Month after month, all plants are having difficulty in improving its data accuracy performance, which is the most essential element of running an ERP system. I am asking Jerome and each plant ERP coordinator develop a comprehensive and concrete improvement action plan by plant reflecting the top five most common areas/tasks for having inaccurate and incomplete data integrity. The deadline and the implementation plan will need to be approved by the plant general manager. By this message, I am requesting the plant general managers to personally commit and facilitate the ERP KPI improvement development and execution plan with Jerome and their plant management team. Please plan to present the overall plan to the business leaders by next Friday,

Answer 1

我的手译版：

Month after month, all plants are having difficulty in improving its data accuracy performance, which is the most essential element of running an ERP system.
月复一月，所有的工厂都有困难提高其数据的精确性（或 准确性，精确度）。而准确的数据却是运行企业资源规划（ERP）系统的最基本（或 重要）元素。
（注：Enterprise Resource Planning，缩写ERP是企业资源计划，又译企业资源规划）

I am asking Jerome and each plant ERP coordinator develop a comprehensive and concrete improvement action plan by plant reflecting the top five most common areas/tasks for having inaccurate and incomplete data integrity
我要求杰罗姆和每个工厂的ERP 协调员根据各自工厂发展一个全面而具体的改善行动计划，以
五大最常见的领域/任务为主显示出其数据完整性的不准确及不完整。

The deadline and the implementation plan will need to be approved by the plant general manager.
期限和实施计划将必需通过工厂总经理的批准。

By this message, I am requesting the plant general managers to personally commit and facilitate the ERP KPI improvement development and execution plan with Jerome and their plant management team.
通过此消息，我要求各工厂总经理亲自承诺，与杰罗姆和他们的工厂管理团队一起促进（或 推动）企业资源规划之关键绩效指标（ERP KPI）的改善开发和执行计划。
（注：Key Performance Indicators，简称KPI 是关键绩效指标又称主要绩效指标、重要绩效指标、绩效评核指标）

Please plan to present the overall plan to the business leaders by next Friday,
请安排在下周五呈献（或 提出）你们的全面计划（或 总体方案）给各企业领导们。

Answer 2

接连几个月了，所有工厂都难以提高数据的准确性，而这是ERP系统运作的最为关键的因素。我要求Jerome和每个工厂的ERP协调人（负责人）针对导致数据不准确和不完整最常见的五项原因，制定出全面具体的改进计划。（计划的）最后期限和实施计划（细则）要由工厂总经理审核。通过这封信，我要求工厂的总经理们亲力亲为，协同Jerome和工厂的管理层，促进ERP和KPI系统的实施和改善。请在下周五前准备好为业务领导们介绍总体计划。

写信人的口气很生气啊
是因为下属工厂实施ERP系统贯彻不力吧本回答被提问者采纳

Answer 3

连续几个月，所有工厂在提高数据准确性方面都存在困难，而这是运行一个ERP系统的最基本要素。我要求杰罗姆和每个工厂的协调员做一个全面、具体的改善行动计划，此计划要针对引起数据完整性问题5个最常见原因。最终期限及实施计划需工厂总经理批准。

通过这封邮件，我将请求工厂的总经理亲自承诺，，协助杰罗姆及其管理团队落实实施计划，促进ERP系统的改善和KPI的提升。请在下周五前准备好向企业领导们介绍总体方案。

ERP, Enterprise Resource Planning, 企业资源规划, 一种综合企业管理软件系统。
KPI, Key Performance Indicator，关键绩效指标，一种目标式量化管理指标

Answer 4

将英语译成中文(简体)
逐月后，所有的植物都难以改善其数据的准确性性能，这是ERP系统运行的最重要的元素。我问杰罗姆和每个工厂的ERP协调员反映五大最常见的地区/不准确，不完整的数据的完整性的任务的植物发展一个全面的和具体的改善行动计划。期限和实施计划，将需要由工厂总经理批准。此消息，我要求该厂总经理亲自承诺和便利的ERP KPI的改善开发和执行计划与杰罗姆和他们的工厂管理团队。请计划的总体规划提出下周五的商界领袖 祝你开心，快了每一天，呵呵！