英语作文

Question

假如你和你的同学在9月9号（星期天）到敬老院慰问老人请你把活动的情况用英语写一篇日记。日记的格式以及开头都已给出，不计入总词汇。
日记内容还应包括以下几点；
1来回的时间及方式
2活动的内容：扫地 洗衣
3活动的感受：很累但很愉快：要照顾，尊重老人

Sept 9th ,2009 Sunday
Today my classmates and I went to the Old People ' s Home

一下请根据上问题是继续写 要80字以内
请速速回答 有重赏 请现在回答 越快越好

Answer 1

Sept 9th ,2009 Sunday
Today my classmates and I went to the Old People ' s Home.We go there by bus.This idea came from a school visit.Our teacher took us to a home for the old.My class spent an afternoon at the home and everyone found the visit very rewarding.(这是 有意义 的意思)
The old people at the home were excited by our visit.They are very talkstive and they told us their personal stories.During our stay,the home was fuul of sound of laughter.We sang songs , swept the floor,cleaned the room,did the dishes and had tea with old people together.
In the end of the day,we felt tired but happy,we took the subway back to school.On the way to school,I start to undrestand we should care for our grandparents.They need us to keep company them.

大体意思是 ，我和同学去敬老院探望老人，过程就不说了。解释一下最后一段,我们很累可是很开心，乘坐地铁返回学校。在回学校的途中，我开始懂得要关心我们的祖父母，他们需要我们去陪伴他们。
尊重这一点我没有扣题，毕竟套到亲情这一关更感人。