Hi,Liu Lei,I'm your cousin Shao Dan.I've heard that you didn't do well in your English exam and lost too many scores in Engish writting.I'm good at English so I think I can give you a hand.Here are some advices.
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Firstly,don't lose your faith and never give up,English is easy to learn and you'll do better. Second, when you wrote an English essay, look it over again and check if there are some grammer mistakes,this will help you a lot. Thirdly, If I were you,I would use some nice sentences like old sayings, using sayings and other nice sentences will gain you more scores.Finally, please write your essay in different sections,this will make your essay looks nice.
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Cheer up！Liu Lei, follow the above steps and you'll do better！I trust you！
追答亲，希望您收藏我哦~这样我下次能更好地帮助到您~！
追问再写一篇可不可以？
追答亲你可以再提过一次问题哦~我看到了会写的
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不要写太相同，要不然老师会发现，谢谢
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