Hello, I am a fan of yours from China. Your video is just fabulous! I'd like to learn from you.
Could you please tell me what software you used for the production? Specific names of the software please. Also, please tell me the procedures of your production, composing the song or making the video first, for example.
Your advice is very much appreciated.
回答楼下的小女孩:
首先,你不应该使用诬蔑性语言。做人要谦虚,即使别人有错,可以善意地指正。
其次,你的错漏百出,还说别人XXXX。
1/ Fan是单数,fans是复数。你怎么能一个人还用复数fans呢?
2/ " I'd like to learn". 向谁学? 原文中说 "向你学", 所以要有 from you. 你的呢?
3/ " software you was used" 这才叫XXXX, 难道不是用软件而是用"你"?
4/ "direct name", 这是什么? 英文不通.
5/ "create the song", 原文是做歌曲,不是"创造歌曲". 做歌曲是Compose, 不是create.
6/ "create the video", 原文是做,不是创造. 你又错了.
7/ 在现代英文书信中, 接受别人给与的忠告, 比较虔诚和尊重的说法是appreciate(即:感谢).这里是"感谢你的忠告"而不是"感谢你". 有什么错? "Your advice is very much appreciated" 这个用法在世界英语国家很普遍.
小朋友, 多学习, 别半桶水就乱晃!! 问问你的外教老师吧,如果你有的话. 什么叫"信,达,雅" (现代翻译之父严复先生所说), 你好好学习吧.
还有: 什么叫form China?
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