Today is 03-17-2012 and is my birthday, I'm very happy because my father book a beautiful birthday cake for me which is my best love tatse -vanilla cream, and my best friend xx help me to celebrate the birthday. He and my parent sang the birthday song for me.
And this year's birthday I'm have three wishes.The first one is : I hope my parent will have a good health and have a good mood everydays. And I hope I can finish my goal this September to bulid a model of the robot. The last one I hope the three years of my junior middle schoolwill be shine.
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My birthday
Today is my nineth birthday.My mother and my grandma bought a big cake for me.When i got home,i saw a cake on the table. There were nine candles on it and there was a present next to the cake.I asked my mother what the present was .My mother told me to open it.Oh!there was a note under the scarf.It said :"the weather is getting cold,please wear this scarf ." "thanks mum and grandma.i love you very much!" I was so happy today.
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