“五一”小长假，你们全家去锡惠公园游玩。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文参加以“How to Behave Politely”为主题的征文比赛，并适当加以评论。要点提示： 亲身经历 1. 我们玩得正开心，不和谐的一幕发生了；一位女士将垃圾扔在地上；2. 我试图阻止，但她拒绝听我的；相反还嘲笑我；3. 我将垃圾捡起来并扔进垃圾桶； 我的观点 4. 我们应该关注自己的礼仪(manners)；5. 当在不同场合时，如：图书馆、过马路、乘车时，应该…… 注意：1. 征文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2. 第5点须用2～3句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥；3. 词数80个左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。How to Behave PolitelyDuring this May Day Holiday, all my family visited Xihui Park. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
| During this May Day Holiday，all my family visited Xihui Park。 We were enjoying ourselves when something unpleasant. A lady threw some litter on the ground. I tried to stop her from doing that, but she refused to listen to me. Instead, she laughed at me. I picked it up and threw it into the dustbin. I think we should pay attention to our manners. When we are in the library , we should keep quiet. When we cross the road, we should watch the traffic lights. Before we get on a bus, we should wait in line, (80 words) |
| 试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般过去时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: try to do sth努力做某事，stop sb from doing sth阻止某人做某事，等等,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理. |