写作思路：要直接简化任务语言。在叙述中，我们要把直接叙述变成间接叙述，尽可能简化人物语言。这样，即使情节连贯，又使语句“简练”。
I went to an English Summer Camp this summer vacation. It's really a good chance to improve my English.
I ate, lived, learnt and played with my foreign teachers and my classmates for about three weeks. In the morning, we had a four-hour-class.
In the afternoon, sometimes we saw an English movie, otherwise we learned some English songs.
In the evening, we had our free time. We all had a lot of fun.
译文：
今年暑假我去了一个英语夏令营。这真是一个提高我英语水平的好机会。
我和我的外教和同学一起吃、一起生活、一起学习、一起玩了大约三个星期。早上，我们上了四个小时的课。
下午，我们有时看英语电影，有时学英语歌曲。
晚上，我们有空闲时间。我们都玩得很开心。
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第1个回答 2016-05-02
Last winter holiday, I went to Shijiazhuang with my parents. We went there by train. The weather was
warm and sunny. The people were friendly. We went to lots of parks. We went swimming. We took a lot
of photos there. I enjoyed myself very rnuch. I hope I can go there again.本回答被网友采纳
warm and sunny. The people were friendly. We went to lots of parks. We went swimming. We took a lot
of photos there. I enjoyed myself very rnuch. I hope I can go there again.本回答被网友采纳
第2个回答 2016-05-02
last year ,I went to Beijing I love there The summer Places is to beautiful and we went to Wangfujing though there are lots of people in there and the things are too expensive ,most people buy things in there.I bought a pair of beautiful shoes in there.I love Beijing .This too beautifuL
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第3个回答 2020-12-06
Last winter holiday, I went tolast year ,I went to Beijing I love there The summer Places is to beautiful and we went to Wangfujing though Shijiazhuang with my parents. We went there by train.
第4个回答 2021-07-09
last year ,I went to Beijing I love there The summer Places is to beautiful and we went to Wangfujing though there are lots of people in there and the things are too expensive ,most people buy things in there.I bought a pair of beautiful shoes in there.I love Beijing .This too beautifuLlast year ,I went to Beijing I love there The summer Places is to beautiful and we went to Wangfujing though there are lots of people in there and the things are too expensive ,most people buy things in there.I bought a pair of beautiful shoes in there.I love Beijing .This too beautifuL
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