英语作文 介绍自己

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内容介绍自己,先说一下,我的名字是elsie,喜欢看美剧,日漫等,爱好画画,有两只宠物,仓鼠"玉米"和荷兰猪"肉丸",偶像是avril和Taylor swift,喜欢吃寿司,炒面,喜欢旅行,家庭神码就先跳过,性格比较乐观,也很懒「写到这点可以举例说明一下」,但毕竟字数有限,以上能多提到就提到一点
文笔优美,这点非常重要
尽量多点让我参考
最好附带中文翻译
回答速度是采纳的重要因素

跪求英语大神相助,好的直接给分,吾辈豁出去了(; ̄ェ ̄)

self-introduction
my name is elsie. my hobby are painting and travel,and also keep two pets---a hamster named "corn" ,guinea pig I prefer call it "meatball".I like watching American drama,Japanese manga.I'm the fan of Avril and Taylor swift. my favorite food are sushi and fired noodles.
I have optimistic character. one points can prove it ,sometimes when i got a low score in the final exam ,I don't care too much about the result because i always believe “the gold must be shining and one day i can make it". however,I'm also lazy man.I never get up until 9 o'clock in weekend.
字数差不多一百,不够的话可以加上你来自哪里,在哪里读书。家庭也没有办法帮你扩展,不知道什么情况。
可以再联系。追问

终于找到一个靠谱的拉,(≧∇≦)鸡东*******
我希望在宠物这方面扩充几句,加点生动的描写,比喻拟人神码的^_^

追答

那就在corn后面加上which is so cude and naughty that it can arouse anyone's love。在meatball后面加上,they can heal my wound when i get hurt.they make me forget the stress from outside when i feel terrible.their meaning to me is not just two pet ,more like two intimate friends with whom i can share my story .拟人了哦,还要加吗?我可是花了时间在上面的哦,如果认可记得采纳哦

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第1个回答  2013-04-06
我是 ---,我在---我喜欢=---我的特长---大概这一类就行了吧?
第2个回答  2013-04-06
My name is Elsie, like movies, anime, like painting, there are two pet hamster and guinea pig, "corn" rice-meat dumplings "," idol is Avril and Taylor swift, like to eat sushi, stir-fried noodles with vegetables, like travel,