以Our Community为题写一篇英语作文
提示：1.I live in......
2.My home is a(n)......
3.There is/are...... in my community.
4.Our community is very......
5.My neighbors are......
my name is bob . i live in yu shan cun many familles with young children live here, there are mang old people living here too.
they are all kind to each other.
there are a lot of tall buildings and small parking lot in my community.
接着写要有提示中的句式
首先说自己的社区的一个大概，其次展开说说，最后表达一下自己的感受。
第一篇：
Our community is a very beautiful and comfortable place.
When you enter our community, you will see a tree lined path. Walking along the path, you will see a clear pond. Usually parents will bring their children here to play. Walking through the pond is the residential area. The residents here are very hospitable. After walking through the residential area, there is a small park where people will exercise in the morning and evening.
Our community is really a very good community.
我们的社区是一个非常美丽、安逸的地方。
当你进入我们的社区，映入眼帘的是一条林荫小道，顺着小道走，你会看见一个清澈的池塘，通常父母们会带孩子来这边玩耍。走过池塘，就是居民区，这边的居民们非常热情好客，穿过居民区之后是一个小型公园，人们在早晨和傍晚的时候会在那里锻炼。
我们社区真的是一个非常好的社区。
第二篇：
Our community is a very different community.
When you walk into our community, you will see an electronic face brushing access control, which greatly improves the security of the community. Go ahead and you will see a very beautiful big fountain, which is the landmark building of our community. Walking through the fountain is the residential area. There is a small park every few residential buildings, making it more convenient for people to exercise.
Our community is so comfortable!
我们的社区是一个非常与众不同的社区。
当你走进我们社区时，你会看到一个电子版的刷脸门禁，这使得社区的安全性大大的提高。继续往前走，你会看到一个非常好看的大喷泉，这是我们社区的标志性建筑，走过喷泉就是居民区了，每隔几栋居民楼就有一个小型公园，使人们锻炼更加方便。
我们的社区真舒适啊！
第三篇：
I live in a beautiful and quiet community. My home is an apartment and my families live on the third floor. There are 3 bedrooms, a big living room ,a kitchen, a dining room in my home .There are many people living in my community. Our community is very clean and tidy. And my neighbors are very friendly and helpful. And there are many beautiful flowers and trees in our community.
I love living in this community. Welcome to our community.
我住在一个美丽而安静的社区。我的家是一套公寓，我的家人住在三楼。我家有三个卧室，一个大客厅，一个厨房，一个餐厅。我的社区里住着很多人。我们的社区非常干净整洁。我的邻居非常友好和乐于助人。我们社区里有许多美丽的花草树木。
我喜欢住在这个社区。欢迎来到我们的社区
I live in a quiet community. My home is an apartment. There are 3 bedrooms, a kitchen, a dining room and so on.There are many people living in my community. Our community is very clean and beautiful. And my neighbors are very friendly and helpful. And there are many beautiful flowers and trees in our community.
I love living in this community.
如果不想大家都一样。
那么看下面这篇，我自己写的：
I live in JinJiang Community（随便取的名字-锦江小区）.My home is in an apartment building.The building is very tall.lThere are many families in my community. Our community is very large and nice. There are some shops and a big garden in it.My neighbors are very friendly and they often help others.I like my community very much. Do you like it?追问
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My name is bob . I live in yu shan cun many familles with young children live here, there are many old people living here too.They are all kind to each other.There are a lot of tall buildin-gs and small parking lot in my community.
Our community is very large and nice. There are many trees and flowers .Besides some shops and a big garden are also in it which make our life convennient and comfortable.My neighbors are very friendly and they often help others.I like my community very much. Do you like it?
写了不少时间，楼主看得过去就采纳把.来自：求助得到的回答
Our Community
I live in a beautiful and quiet community. My home is an apartment and my families live on the third floor. There are 3 bedrooms, a big living room ,a kitchen, a dining room in my home .There are many people living in my community. Our community is very clean and tidy. And my neighbors are very friendly and helpful. And there are many beautiful flowers and trees in our community.
I love living in this community. Welcome to our community.
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追答Our Community
My name is Bob and I live in Yu Shan Cun which is a harmonous and beautiful community . My home is one of the big family and I live with my mother , my father and my grandparents together. Many families with young children live here .There are many different kinds of plants around our community , such as big trees , beautiful flowers and so on. There are a lot of tall buildings and small parking lots in my community. Our community is very clean and tidy because many workers will collect the rubbish and make everything in right order . There are many old people living here too and they are all kind to each other and they often dance together after supper .
I'd like to share everything abut my community with my friends because I love it so much.
已经改好了, 楼主看下行不? 自己写的..........