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Question

My hobbies
Everybocly both has their hobbies.How about mine?Well I like playing badmintoon、riding my bicycle playing teenins、and every day.I play them with my friend.I think play them is tired but very exciting and good for our health.Do you like play them?I think most people both like them.What about you hobbies?Can you tell me?

Answer 1

Everybody both has their hobbies. both错，应该删去；their错，应该用his/her

Well I like playing badmintoon、riding my bicycle playing teenins、and every day

这句话第一个顿号应该改成逗点，riding bicycle中间不应该有my，riding bicycle和playing tennis应该用and相连，every day前面的顿号和and应该去掉；
I play them with my friend 此处them指代不明，应该改为the games
I think play them is tired but very exciting and good for our health 这句话think后面应该加that，play应该改为playing

Do you like play them? 此处play应该改为playing

I think most people both like them. 此句应该改为l think most people like them both.

What about you hobbies?Can you tell me? 此句第一句中的about应该改为are

Answer 2

My hobbies

Everybocly both(改为all) has their hobbies.How about mine?Well I like playing badmintoon、riding my bicycle (加上and)playing teenins(改为tennis)、and(去掉and) every day.I play them with my friend(改为friends).I think play (改为playing)them is tired(改为tiring) but very exciting and good for our health.Do you like play(改为playing) them?I think most people both改为(all) like them.What about you(改为yours) hobbies?Can you tell me?追问

可不可以再写一下改的原因？

追答

both 只表示两人。句子明显说的是人人所以用all。它表示三者或三者以上
tennis 是正确写法
and 是来连接相同词或短语的。所以要加在两个并列成份前面
friends和朋友玩不能只和一个人所以用复数
playing 用动名词做主语，动词原形不能
tired 是人做主语用。即人感到累的。 tiring是事做主语。是令人感到累的。
like playing 加like后不接动词原形。用动名词
people 是多数人后用all。不用all 它表示三者以上
yours相当于your hobbies.