高分急求快餐店情景英语!!!

我开了一家香港蛋挞店,顾客中有很多老外,现急求常用英语,答得好的话可以继续送分,谢谢!主要翻译以下对话:(蛋挞可以用TSAI代替)
你好,请问您要来份蛋挞吗?我们有六种口味的,您要哪一种?A是甜味的,B是咸味的,味道不同,但都很好吃。今天我们所有的口味都有,今天我们只有A口味的了,今天我们A口味的卖光了,今天我们所有的蛋挞都卖光了,请您稍等2分钟,我们马上就做好,欢迎下次再来,A先生,您又来了,今天想吃哪种?A先生,您的蛋挞做好了,建议您尽快吃,因为时间一长凉了就不好吃了,对不起,我这个没做好,我再给您做一份行吗?耽误您的时间真是抱歉,对不起,我还以为你要的是这种口味的呢,那我再给您做一份吧。您稍等,我用吹风机给您吹一下,这样味道就比较脆了,我给您装在纸袋里,您用不用把它装在塑料袋里。这个蛋挞有点粘锅,但不影响味道的。这是我们店的优惠卡,持此卡可以打9折,您一次购买超过15元我们可以给您打九折。
现在只能想起这么多了,回答的朋友再帮我想想,看看还能用到什么句子,本人不胜感激!!!
第一个回答的朋友,您的语法可是出现了很多问题啊,希望后面回答的朋友能认真对待,本人再次感激!!!

有几个朋友回答的很好,还有些朋友不太认真对待,我想对于认真回答的朋友,我肯定会给分的,因为我有足够多的分,
现在的问题是,有没有哪个朋友可以帮我多想想,还能用到哪些语句,越地道的越好,希望能帮我补充补充,非常感激!!!

你好,请问您要来份蛋挞吗?
Hello, would you like have egg tart?

我们有六种口味的,您要哪一种?A是甜味的,B是咸味的,味道不同,但都很好吃。
We have six kinds taste, which one would you like? A is sweet, B is salty, although different taste but all of them are delicious.

今天我们所有的口味都有,
Today we have all kinds taste.

今天我们只有A口味的了,
Today we only have taste A.

今天我们A口味的卖光了,
Today taste A all sold out.

今天我们所有的蛋挞都卖光了,
Today our all egg tart have been sold out.

请您稍等2分钟,我们马上就做好,
We will make out immediately, please wait 2 minutes.

欢迎下次再来,
Welcome your represence next time.

A先生,您又来了,今天想吃哪种?
Mr. A, welcome you coming again. What would you like to have?

A先生,您的蛋挞做好了,建议您尽快吃,因为时间一长凉了就不好吃了,
Mr.A, your egg tart is ok. We suggest you have it asap cause of that cool down will be not nice taste after long time.

对不起,我这个没做好,我再给您做一份行吗?
I regret that I did bad job, would you mind that I make one more again for you?

耽误您的时间真是抱歉,对不起,我还以为你要的是这种口味的呢,那我再给您做一份吧。
I am really sorry for take your time. Sorry, I thought this taste is which you want. I will make another one for you asap.

您稍等,我用吹风机给您吹一下,这样味道就比较脆了,我给您装在纸袋里,您用不用把它装在塑料袋里。
Please wait a moment ,I take blower to blowing that, then the taste will be more crisp. I will put it in parper-bag, then you no need take it in plastic-bag.

这个蛋挞有点粘锅,但不影响味道的。
The egg tart has a bit adhibit pan, but doesn't influence the taste.

这是我们店的优惠卡,持此卡可以打9折,您一次购买超过15元我们可以给您打九折。
This is concessionary card of our store, using this you can get 10%discount when you once-purchasing amount cover 15 RMB.
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第1个回答  2008-04-19
你好,请问您要来份蛋挞吗?
hello, can i help you? would like to have an egg tart?
我们有六种口味的,您要哪一种?
we have six different flavors. which one would you like?
A是甜味的,B是咸味的,味道不同,但都很好吃。
A is sweet and B is salty. Different flavors but both taste good
今天我们所有的口味都有,
we have all the flavors available today
今天我们只有A口味的了,
sorry, we only have A today
今天我们A口味的卖光了,
sorry, our A is out of stock today
今天我们所有的蛋挞都卖光了,
sorry, we are all sold out today.
请您稍等2分钟,我们马上就做好,
please hold on for two minutes, it will be right done
欢迎下次再来,
please come again
A先生,您又来了,今天想吃哪种?
welcome again Mr A, what would you like to have today?
A先生,您的蛋挞做好了,建议您尽快吃,因为时间一长凉了就不好吃了,
Mr A, your egg tart is ready. may I suggest you to eat while it's hot? I won't take so nice when it cools down.
对不起,我这个没做好,我再给您做一份行吗?
sorry, this was not well done. can I make another one for you?
耽误您的时间真是抱歉,对不起,
sorry to keep you waiting.
我还以为你要的是这种口味的呢,那我再给您做一份吧。
I thought this was the one you wanted. sorry about it but can I make another one for you?
您稍等,我用吹风机给您吹一下,这样味道就比较脆了,
Please hold on for a minute. Let me dry it with a blower so that it will be more crispy.
我给您装在纸袋里,您用不用把它装在塑料袋里。
I have packed your egg tarts in a paper bag. would you need another plastic bag?
这个蛋挞有点粘锅,但不影响味道的。
this tart sticked to the pot a bit, but it wont' affect the taste.
这是我们店的优惠卡,持此卡可以打9折,
this is our discount card. you can get a 10% off with this card.
您一次购买超过15元我们可以给您打九折。
If you spend 15 yuan or above in single purchase, we can give you a 10% discount

我觉得您想得已经很全面了。这里的答复的语气都是比较礼貌的,换言之,也就是比较正式的用语。对于熟客来讲,也许可以使用比较简单的用语,不过这个取决于客人的想法,开店的还是礼貌一点比较好~:)

追加
在这里吃还是带走?
having here or take-away?
总共是20元
total is 20 yuan
找零20元
here are your 20 yuan changes
第2个回答  2008-04-17
(Egg tarts can be used to replace TSAI)
Hello, I would like to ask you to the egg tarts? We have six tastes, which you want to? A is sweet, B is salty, taste different, but very tasty. Today, we have all the flavor, and today we are the only A taste, we taste the A sold out, and today all of our egg tarts are sold out, you wait two minutes, we do a good job immediately, welcome to come back the next, Mr. A, you will come up, what to eat today? A President, your egg tarts well, as soon as possible is recommended that you eat, not because of the delicious cool over time, I am sorry that I did not do this, I do give you a trip? Wasted your time really sorry, I am sorry, I thought you this is the taste of it, then I give you to do a bar. You wait, I used to your hair dryer blowing about this flavor is more brittle, and I give you into a paper bag, you do not have to use it, packed in plastic bags. The egg tarts Nien pot a bit, but does not affect the taste. This is our shop concession card, this card can hold a 9% discount to your first purchase over 15 yuan we can give you a 10% discount.
第3个回答  2008-04-19
HI!(‘HI!’一词用在这里,给人一种很亲近、容易和顾客较沟通的感觉。常见于国外的影视剧中)Ask that you must come the share egg to flog? We have six kind of tastes, which one kind do you want? A is the sweet taste, B is the salt taste, the flavor is different, but is very delicious. Today our all tastes have, today we only then a taste, our A taste has sold out today, today our all eggs flogged have sold out, asked you to wait a bit 2 minutes, we completed immediately, welcome will come again next time, Mr. A, you have come, today which kind wants to eat? Mr. A, your egg flogged has completed, suggested that you ate as soon as possible, because the time one long cool has not been delicious, sorry, my this has not completed, I made a line again to you? Delays your time is really is sorry, sorry, I also thought what you want is this kind of taste, then I make one again to you. You wait a bit, I use the air blower to blow to you, such flavor has been crisp, I install to you in the paper bag, do you need it to install in the plastic bag. This egg flogs a little sticks the pot, but does not affect the flavor. This is our shop concessionary card, holds this card to be possible to hit 9 zhe, a your purchase surpasses 15 Yuan us to be possible to hit to you 9 zhe. only could remember now these many, replied the friend helped me to think again, had a look also to be able to use any sentence, myself felt grateful extremely!!!
第4个回答  2008-04-18
I opened a shop in Hong Kong egg tarts, customers have many foreigners, are now commonly used English Jiqiu, Dadehao it can continue to send-Thank you! Main translate the following dialogue: (egg tarts can be used to replace TSAI)
Hello, I would like to ask you to the egg tarts? We have six tastes, which you want to? A is sweet, B is salty, taste different, but very tasty. Today, we have all the flavor, and today we are the only A taste, we taste the A sold out, and today all of our egg tarts are sold out, you wait two minutes, we do a good job immediately, welcome to come back the next, Mr. A, you will come up, what to eat today? A President, your egg tarts well, as soon as possible is recommended that you eat, not because of the delicious cool over time, I am sorry that I did not do this, I do give you a trip? Wasted your time really sorry, I am sorry, I thought you this is the taste of it, then I give you to do a bar. You wait, I used to your hair dryer blowing about this flavor is more brittle, and I give you into a paper bag, you do not have to use it, packed in plastic bags. The egg tarts Nien pot a bit, but does not affect the taste. This is our shop concession card, this card can hold a 9% discount to your first purchase over 15 yuan we can give you a 10% discount.
Now only think of so many, and a friend to help answer I think, to see what can use the sentence, I would be grateful! ! !
第5个回答  2008-04-17
hello, what can i do for you? want a TSAI? we have 6 flavors, which one do you like? A is sweet one, B is salty one, different flavor, but all taste. We have all flavors available today, we only have A flavor today. A flavor sold out today, sorry all flavors are sold out today, give me 2 minutes please, the TSAI is on the way, see you next time, Hello Mr. A, good to see you again, which one do you like today? Hey Mr. A, here we are, you had better have them now to get better taste, I am sorry, this one is not done well, do you mind i make you another one? I am so sorry to make you wait, i had throught you want this flavor, its my bad, I make you another one. Hang on, give me seconds, let me blow the TSAI by blower, it will make it taste more crispy, let me put the TSAI in the paper bag, you dont need to put them into a plastic bag. this TSAI is a little bit sticky, but dont worry abt the taste. this is our coupons,you can have 10% discount with this coupon at cashier, if you buy more than 15 Yuan one time, we can give you 10% discount.