英语作文，120词，要求其中包括名词性从句，被动语态，强调句等特殊句型，可以现在帮我写吗？带翻译

Question

下面是一所学校的课程表。请以“My thought on a timetable in a middle school”
为题，按照下列要求写一篇英语短文。

1．简要概括表格内容；

2．给出自己的观点。

一个中学生的课表

星期时间
星期一
星期二
星期三
星期四
星期五
星期六
上
午
1
数学
英语
数学
英语
语文
数学
2
语文
数学
英语
数学
英语
语文
3
英语
生物
物理
化学
历史
英语
4
政治
地理
历史
语文
数学
物理
下
午
5
体育
化学
地理
生物
体育
化学
6
物理
作文
政治
化学
物理
地理
7
自习
作文
心理
自习
政治
历史
晚 上
作业
作业
作业
作业
作业

From this table, we can see that a middle school student in China has as many
as 12 different subjects in a week

Answer 1

你好。文章如下：

中文： 从这个课程表中我们可以看出：现在中学生的课业负担非常重，他们几乎没有时间去放松：一个礼拜只有两节体育和一节心理课。沉重的课业负担可能会导致中学生逼迫自己去不断学习，这可能导致身体和心理的长期疲惫。严重的也许会导致性格发育畸形。所以，学校应该考虑除了填鸭式的教育外，更应该注重学生其他素质，比如团队协作能力，以及情商的培养。

英文: From this table, we can see that a middle school student in China has as many
as 12 different subjects in a week. Undoubtedly, heavy course load shortens the time for relaxing, as evidenced by 2 sports classes and 1 psychology class in a week. On the other hand, (强调句)it is the increasingly heavy burden that forces students to study around the clock, inevitably causing physical and mental fatigue. In serious cases, this may lead to mental disorder. Therefore, schools should reflect on what the students are experiencing(宾语从句). Instead of duck stuffing, other important characters should be considered (被动) such as teamwork and so on.追问

还有吗？是不是短了点？

追答

你好，增加了字数以后，目前 128个单词
From this table, we can see that a middle school student in China has as many
as 12 different subjects in a week. The majority of the classes are traditional courses such as Chinese, Math, English, etc. The total studying time per week is around 45 hours. Undoubtedly, heavy course load shortens the time for relaxing, as evidenced by 2 sports classes and 1 psychology class in a week. On the other hand, it is the increasingly heavy burden that forces students to study around the clock, inevitably causing physical and mental fatigue. In serious cases, this may lead to mental disorder. Therefore, schools should reflect on what the students are experiencing. Instead of duck stuffing, other important characters should be considered such as teamwork and so on.

Answer 2

From this table, we can see that a middle school student in China has as many as 12 different subjects in a week. A child under this schedule will have to go to school every day including a half of Saturdays. The total studying time in a week adds up to as many as 45 hours.Knowledge is important. But this does not mean what you get out of the text books. “Pure” text-book knowledge can be useless without combining it with practice. It becomes worse if it is acquired at the cost of the students’ health and sense of happiness.So what we should do is to reduce the academic burden of the students. Add in more “free time” for them. The students may find studying more interesting and will be more willingly to do it under better health conditions. 从这张表中，我们可以看到，在中国的一所中学的学生在一周的多达12个不同的人。一个孩子在这样的计划将不得不每天去学校包括一个半星期六。总的学习时间在一周内增加了多达45个小时。
知识是重要的。但这并不意味着你滚出去的书。“纯”的书本知识不结合实际是无用的。它变得更坏，如果是在学生们的健康和幸福感的代价。
所以我们应该做的是减轻学生的课业负担。加入他们的“自由时间”。学生们可能会发现学习更有趣，更愿意去做更好的卫生条件下。