写作思路:要直接简化任务语言。在叙述中,我们要把直接叙述变成间接叙述,尽可能简化人物语言。这样,即使情节连贯,又使语句“简练”。
The people I respect the most is my father. He is a doctor. He always busy with work.
Since I can remember, he never spent a whole weekend to stay with me. He goes to the hospital very early before I get up, and comes back home after I sleep. But I doesn’t matter at all, he is hero to me.
He devotes almost all the time to his patients, many lives are saved. He always said, a man should have dignity, integrity, honor, and most of all, be helpful to others. This affected me deeply, so I work hard so that someday I could be the man like my father.
译文:
我最尊敬的人是我的父亲。他是一名医生。他总是忙于工作。
从我记事起,他从来没有花整个周末陪我。我起床前他很早就去了医院,我睡觉后他就回家了。但我一点也不在乎,他是我心目中的英雄。
他几乎把所有的时间都花在他的病人身上,许多人的生命都得救了。他总是说,一个人应该有尊严、正直、荣誉,最重要的是,要乐于助人。这深深地影响了我,所以我努力工作,希望有一天我能成为像我父亲一样的人。