求2018年6月10日的托福独立作文真题范文与解析?

2018年6月10日托福作文考试题目是 :In order to adapt to the life in university and succeed, if you are a freshman, which method do you think is better?
1. attending a one-week orientation or introduction program when you are in the university campus and before classes begin
2. meeting regularly in your first year with students in your major field who have entered the university for several years
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

题目关键解析:题目的正确理解是-求采纳

1假如你是 大学新人 (限定住了 你是新人)

2为了”适应大学生活“并且能”成功“,

3策略A: 在大学校园 开课之前 参加一周的 ”迎新培训“

4 策略B: 每周规律地与学长/姐会谈(同方向 入学已经几年的)

题目的解决要求是:哪一个方式更好,使用理由与事实性细节支撑论证?

此题目的难度在于:在叙述题目主干(新生+为了在大学+适应 以及 成功)的叙述中ETS(故意)叠加了很多限定条件。

开头段满分范例:

(1)Freshman is a person who is confronted with a new environment and has to come up with ideas of creativity and skills of novelty to deal with all challenges . (2)So does a freshman in university. (3)And which way is more parasitical for him to adapt to this new surrounding?(4)Personally ,compared with proposal of getting some instruction at the beginning of new semester ,the counterpart proposal of meeting some experienced fellows of senior grade is much better to facilitate a nice adaptation for new university life and thus boosts his success in many aspects.

第一句:定义法开头

第二句 :定义词与题目结合

第三句:与题目的Task结合

第四句:主旨句

主体段满分范例:

First, the frequent meeting of the academic issues with the senior students , step by step, will help one to acquire some scientific study methods , making him to overcome the school difficulty more easily ; however , a fixed time of orientation at the very beginning will not forsee and solve those practical and personal problems . (论证展开部分请自行思考)

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第1个回答  2018-06-29
别说5分了 你就是给200分 也没人给你写 费时费力 还有可能不被采纳 谁会干这蠢事 有那功夫 答50道题 2000分都得了本回答被网友采纳