我12 月份考雅思 写作必须上6 这样作文我我能拿几分

oday,experts make a suggestion that children should begin learning a foreign language earlier than before at primary school. In my opinion, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
Firstly, if children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school, they can touch the language at their young ages. It can help them to knowledge the right accent and earlier the reception the new knowledgeable. The most important is their more interesting in the language than they grow up. The other reason is in the primary school, children have much relaxing time and it can be used to learn the language. After they enter into the higher school, they have less pressure in their study career.
Also, children begin learning a foreign language has some advantages at primary but I belive it is not a right choice. In my country, there is no entrance exams before the senior high school, so children have different levels when they enter into the secondary school,teachers is difficult to teach their students in variety of levels and the school leader is hard to arrange lesson schedule to their students. What is the serious problem is the teacher has no high teaching level at primary school,thus children maybe knowledge of the wrong word pronunciation,then it is hard to correct their accent,it is so terrible,
In my conclusion, learning a foreign language at primary school has some advantage but I belive learning in the secondary school much be better.

你好,我考过雅思。我看了你写的,里面有一些语法错误,架构有点冗繁。总体是不错的,比如“experts make a suggestion that children should begin learning a foreign language earlier than before at primary school”表达为"Experts suggest that children start learning a foreign language prior to primary schooling"可能显得更简洁。这里should是多余的。我个人感觉,雅思对用词的准确性、专业性和句子架构的流畅和简洁要求是比较高的。加油,祝你早日成功!
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第1个回答  2015-08-17
我看了你写的,里面有一些语法错误,架构有点冗繁。总体是不错的,比如“experts make a suggestion that children should begin learning a foreign language earlier than before at primary school”表达为"Experts suggest that children start learning a foreign language prior to primary schooling"可能显得更简洁。这里should是多余的。我个人感觉,雅思对用词的准确性、专业性和句子架构的流畅和简洁要求是比较高的。加油,祝你早日成功!
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