英语作文分析（语法，流畅度）

Question

只分析语法正误和流畅度，顺便点评一下。至于跑题什么的就别管了···（不排除打字错误）       Every student will be found with the problem after the National College Entrance Examination.Should I choose a good major or a good university?There're two different opinions between students.    The first group of them tend to choose a good major.It's the reason that they learn the subjects which they're interested in,and for further advise,it's convenient to choose the job they like.    However,for the rest of the students,things are different.They prefer to choose a good college first.Because of the importance of a good study condition,it's worth choosing a good college,which will do a lot of favour to your growing.And even more,students who're graduate from a good college always get high attention among these who're graduate from common colleges.    As far as I am concerned,I'd like to choose a good major  first.Since working is boring and tired,it's better to do jobs whatever you want.And that's means,you won't be able to be fired from your work since you're hardworking.

Answer 1

“There're two different opinions between students. ” 中的between应该改为among，因为students是三者或以上。
“It's the reason that they learn the subjects which they're interested in“ 中the reason前应该加for，for the reason that 是固定结构；learn前面应该加can,这样句意更通顺
“do a lot of favour ”中lot of 应该去掉
“ who're graduate from ”中 are 去掉
“ jobs whatever ” 改为whatever jobs ，因为whatever是形容词
“won't be able to ” 改为can't ，be able to 指经过努力而获得的一种能力

Answer 2

第二篇：

　　1、一些人喜欢住在城市，因为城市生活有许多便利。

　　2、但有些人喜欢住在农村。

　　3、我认为，……

　　Where to live —in the City or in the Country

　　Some people like living in the city because city life has many advantages. They think there are more job opportunities in cities,life there is more colorful and meaningful than that in the country,and there are more modern conveniences in cities for people to enjoy.

　　But some other people prefer to live in the countryside. They say life in the countryside is closer to nature and better for their health,life there is quieter and that country people are more honest than city people.

　　I would like to live in a city when I am young to earn enough money and I live in the countryside when I am old for having a quite life.

Answer 3

The first group of them tend to choose a good major，中的tend应该加s吧。因为是第三人称做主语。