帮我修改一下这篇高一英语作文，找出合理和不合理
first at all,congratulations on your success in the exam.you will get back,i hear.so please accept my invitation that intend a party in my home with you on sunday thanks for your coming.
secondly.on the one hand,you mentioned that making such great progress in your studies that we all sincerely take prides of it.on the other hand,it was so nice of you to help us in your english studies.by the way,we miss the a period of time that we all together with you.
eventually,i hope you can in time.
best wishes to you!
First at all,congratulate on your success in the exam.I heard that you will get back soon.So I want to inviteyou to come to the party that I prepared for you in my home .Sunday.I hope you can come.
On the one hand,you mentioned that you made such great progress in your studies .We all take pride of you.On the other hand,it was so nice of you to help us to study English.By the way,we miss the time that we spent together.
eventually,I hope you can go there on time.
Best wishes to you!
我觉得你写作文时，应该要注意句首，语言名词的第一个字母要大写。还要注意时态。下面的图片是我改的部分，如果有什么问题，可以随时联系我。希望你成功。
secondly,you mentioned that you made such a great progress in your studies and we all sincerely proud of you.on the other hand,it was so nice of you to help us in our english studies.by the way,we miss the time that we all together with you.
eventually,i hope you can on time.
best wishes to you!
说实话，蛮纠结的文章。你是期待朋友回来。不是强迫TA回来吧！本回答被网友采纳
I am writing to congratulate on your success in the exam.I hear that you have got back and I want to invite you to have a party with my family on sunday .Last time you mentioned that you had made great progress in your studies and we all sincerely take prides of you .Of course it was nice of you to help us in our English studies.We miss the time when we were together.I am waiting for you and hope you can come on time.
Best wishes for you!