for at best their victory never dawns on the shining new world the had dreamed of ,cleansed of all human meanness.
胜利的曙光永远不会出现在他们梦想中那个抹杀了一切人类劣根性的世界里! 你好,谢谢你的帮助。可是这个是别人给我的翻译,我觉得很通顺呢!
那可能是你把they打成了the的缘故吧